you're brilliant, like the sun, for writing this! great job!

Oh that was just wonderful. Painfully sweet, it's kinda hard to describe with words how this made me feel

Sweet! It made me teary-eyed at the end.

Love this! beautiful piece.

aww!! its so sad!!
poor severus!!

xx keiji

That was actually really good- I liked that a lot. Keep up the good work.

Brilliant

This story is absolutely amazing! I adore it! So sweet and touching :)

Poor Sevy, I wanna cry.

Sad but beautiful. Good writing.

Wish it had been a little longer there was room for more.