lemme guess, potter? who is it?

so, so not fair!
what does he choose! o u r evil! EVIL!!
gah!

Well, in that case, it's really either Snape or Harry, isn't it? It's not necessarily Harry or the Dark Lord, because the Dark Lord's death is all good except that Snape himself will die.

*ponders* I suppose it depends on what kind of Snape yours is - is he the Good!Snape, the one willing to sacrifice himself, or is he the Evil!Snape, the one who knows that if he kills Potter, that's very good, and perhaps he'll be able to kill the Dark Lord later?

Very interesting dilemma. And I enjoyed the story.

Oh God! Please don't do this to us! You are soo evil! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! CONTINUE!!

I hope Snape will do the right thing.

And then goes to a paradise without any Gryffindors. He doesn't need the kind of friend Dumbledore has been to him. After all, AD did absolutely nothing to stop Harry from hating Snape--it's so much easier to run a school by being the good guy and letting someone else do all the hard discipline.

Continue, please?

(of course, Harry won't care that Snape has, once again, saved his life. Gryffindors don't have to care about anyone but other Gryffindors, they've all been carefully taught. And guess who taught them that. No, Dumbledore is asking a great deal of Snape, even from beyond the grave).

I'm all for cliffhangers, but really! Which did he choose?

Oh ho! Verfy interesting dilema there. I really think you ought to continue this, but have alternating chapters in first/third person. So, the next would would be in third. I think that'd create quite an intriguing mix of action and internal monologue. But, that's if you so desire to write more. Very nice either way. Oh, a few words of constructive criticism, the line starting with "Yet, killing Potter means..." seemed slightly out of place. At first glance, it seems that Snape is agaisnt the idea of the Dark Lord winning, so the shift from that paragraph, (the one beginning with "There are consequences..."), to the 'yet' seems awkward in that there's no change in thinking. I propose "Furthermore" in yet's stead. Unless, you are implying that Snape would enjoy/support the Dark Lord's victory. In which case, I suggest making his support or perhaps apathy of that notion slightly more pronounced. Does that makes sense? Twas just a small thing that nagged at me.