Man that was intense. And so sad you know? Not sure I quite get the ending but the 'soaking into the soul' piece is that saying a new Niwa boy is born and therefore Dark is being readjusted into his soul to wait for his 14th? Cool all the same though

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aww man!! this sux! (not your story, but how it ends 4 poor dai and dark) aww... T_T it was good..illread it when im depressed...*cry*

Aw... *tear* Poor Dark. This was lovely.

I love angst stories. And I belive this is one of the kinds that stick in your head and never let go. This is. . . this is. . .AWSOME!XD

It was sad, but I liked it

*squeaks* How cute! Awe, poor Dark! Kawaii sou . . . T_T Poor Daisuke.

that was...good. lol.. Keep up the fantastic work and never stop writing.

How sad! This was quite well-written and very in-character. I loved how Dark was even sadder than Daisuke as he left... aww. Great job!

Wow...ya know...this fic was just one of those stories that reminds you of sad yet at the same time calm things...like rain, heh, which surprised me a bit because there was rain in here, great job dude, luv yaz

Yuki Haitani^_~

The angst! T__T This is brilliant. And the ending is beautiful. Please write more soon!

~firedraygon97

That was written very well. I liked how you made all these intresting connections not brought up in other fics/short stories. Dark's name for instance. *claps^

Oh! I always hate it when i read a fanfic and they have to separate! It's so sad! No! Thsi was so sadly good!! Good, but so sad... WA! Sigh, so sad. lol. but it was. Poor poor Daisuke and Dark.

*bursts into tears* WAHAHAHAHAHA!(that was just for good effort. you know, wasted time on my part to show how much i love this.) AH! I LOVE THIS! SO PWETTY *celebrates* GAH! KAWAII! I CAN'T GET ENOUGH! *scrabbles helplessly at fic* *has a wonderful idea* *prints it out* *laughs maniacally and sticks it in school folder to read during class* we, i never thought of that before...*goes off to do this with other fics, completely forgetting to review*

NANI!? thats it T_T no there has to be more *sniff* i'm wrong arn't i? well i loved it...T_T i would have made the best dark/daisuke shonen ai story...*sighs* oh well it was ur work and u get to decied wat to do with it ne?