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| Hero.Of.The.Hazard 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseLOL Nice btw, Twilight power Fortunato died from lack of oxygen because Montresor chucked the torch in there x.x |
| Light Phantom Ninja 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this! Thank god I take Latin so I already know what 'In pace requiescat' means... good story though. |
| Mantineus 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! |
| Akito17 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuse0.0 Cool. The first time I read this story in lit, it creeped me out slightly (but the worst one that creeped me out was that one where he murdered the old man cause he was scared of his eye. I forgot the name of that one...) Nice job! ^_^ It's sort of funny because in my lit class, we just got done listening to a tape about Mr. Poe. Poor guy got so drunk, he passed out in a gutter and was hauled off to the warden where he died. Man, he had a rough life. :( I can't wait for you to update 'Light in the Darkness' and I really liked this one! Adios ~Akito17 |
| Angel's Star 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is really cool! I read that story in my English class recently, but I didn't understand it. This really did help me to know what was going on in the story a little bit better. Good job! |
| anonymous 2006-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseCool take on the story, from the opposite point of view. Constructively: Maybe expanding Forunado's POV slightly more would lead to a deeper story (like... who is he really?) But then again, he's drunk... so that's OK. Really nice story. |
| Alison 2006-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! that was very well written! we just read this story in english today! thats very ironic! but yes you did a good job to capture Fortunato's POV on everything! |
| Twilight Power 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseCool. I still wish I knew HOW Fortunato died though. Alcohol posioning? Lack of oxygen? Still, good. |
| Ducky McQuack Quack 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuse=O No Way!! I'm having a test on this tomorrow! Well this and the Gold Bug, Tell Tale Heart, and Poe's life. Cool! xD |