Excellent story!

aw this was cute!

Ah that wasn't crap. Another original Harry x Hermione

Mixed feelings about this story. Don't get me wrong, it was very well-written, but a few things just didn't sit well with me.

The fact that Hermione was made Headmistress so young was one of them. Yes, she is a very brilliant witch, but I doubt McGonagall would just drop the job on her. Now, before you go all defensive on me, I realize she was still there to help and guide Hermione, as were the portraits. But the Headmistress being hardly older than the other 7th years? Not very realistic.

Other than that, I thought it was good. I was happily surprised at the minimum of Ginny-bashing. I could actually picture Ginny being like that, and I'm pleased at how she seemed to accept it (marginally, at least). Their children sound adorable ^.^

Good job, overall.

I really enjoyed this story, but for some reason it was hard for me to picture Hermione as headmistress. i kept picturing her like Mcgonagall, or dumbledore, you know how dumbledore had that "twinkle" in his eyes and was so calm about everything. that's how i pictured her. anyway this was a really cute story.

Again, great oneshot. The twins sound so cute!

mommy! scared me a little... not to be mean, I'm so sorry, maybe it's my computer, but "Curly back hair?"

yes i luv this!

lol that story was awesome h/hr forever ginny smells

what happened to His Royal Scrimgeousness?

So cute! I love the twins, they are adorable. I idea of Hermione being teh Headmistriss is fantastic. I think she would make an awesome one. Til later readings

It is the type of story I'm looking for. Great Job.

"Home can be the Pennsylvania Turnpike..."

Actually, I do like the idea of Hermione as Harry's sanctuary, and it does fit. There has always been a certain mothering element in her relationship with him. (And no, I do not take that as evidence that Harmony is a bad idea; I think Harmony is a very good idea.)

What is utterly implausible about this fic is that Ginny, given that she has not turned evil and that the romance between Harry and Hermione did not begin before Voldemort's final defeat, did not know Harry and Hermione were even dating, let alone married, when their kids were already 2.

When you set up a story, you have to think about how your characters got to the point where the story begins--the backstory. And the backstory must be consistent with the characters every bit as much as the part of the story that we see. For this story to work, we have to believe that /Harry and Hermione/ would date, marry and have kids without Ginny knowing. This might be possible if Harry were concealing his whereabouts--but he's teaching at Hogwarts, so the whole Wizarding world knows where he is. It is very difficult to believe, then, that Harry and Hermione would not tell Ginny and invite her to the wedding: She counts as a friend to Harry and even more so, as you mention, to Hermione. Harry and Hermione don't ignore their friends that way, even in HBP. Moreover--where's Ron in this story? If he's still alive, he's bound to be very close to Harry and Hermione, unless he left them when Hermione chose Harry over him--and either way it seems likely that he'd tell his sister.

Aww... that was so cute. I kinda felt bad for Ginny, but hey we can't have it all. I really liked it and you made Hermione perfect in her reaction to not telling Ginny sooner. Ginny was her only true female friend. I really liked it and understand the being busy thing perfectly. Until next time, ja ne!

Its a sweet story. Looking forward to your next one.