So awesome. I'm trying to write a story where thr VD logs entires in his Pip Boy about what's happening when he goes to Necropolis, but so far, it's pretty bad.

I'm so pleased to have found your piece, I've looked long and hard but have found surprisingly few focs based on what I consider to be the most imaginative RPG.

Your story is moving, as I read it I remember how I felt the first time I was in that situation... You captured it very well. I hope you'll write more...

I'd like to submit my own fic based on fallout but not about the One or the Decendant but after them, staged in the Fallout world post Fallout2. I justhave to get the guts to submit it.

Anyway, I'd like to archive your story for my own collection if its ok with you. :)

Not a bad story, but I was hoping for an explanation of WHY the VD would kill Darkwater in the first place? Is he simply amoral and greedy, doesn't sound like that, or does he buy Gizmo's schtick about saving the town? Why is Tycho willing to go along with this? Why is Ian? And isn't the VD conserned about Darkwater's deputies between him and the relative saftey of Gizmo's?

Hope this review helped.