 ronandhermioneareforever 2009-10-13 . chapter 8Really great story! :D |
 Crash Murphy 2009-09-20 . chapter 24Holy crap, Casey TOLD George and Nora! Oh wow! You hit me with that! |
 SusanMarieS 2009-08-29 . chapter 31great story just felt like it was missing afew chapters. but thank you very much for the effort. it really was very good. |
 DarkBelieverAnge 2009-07-04 . chapter 31i loved this story! it kept me reading until the end! |
 Sinistera of the Akatsuki 2009-06-17 . chapter 31love it very much |
 Jojo the ninja 2009-02-09 . chapter 1Interesting story. definetly peeked my interest. great job. |
 seras246501 2009-01-31 . chapter 12So, abby slapped derek? Is that the truth? Though the boards thing is more believable. And that is what was said.. |
 Rae Tamwood 2008-12-14 . chapter 31Loved this story, it's totally in character (in my opinion“). |
 Catastrophic.Composer. 2008-10-27 . chapter 31wow. can i say i am in love?
BECAUSE I AM (:
this was ahmazing! i think a sequel would be fantabulous! |
 wyntrshayde 2008-10-17 . chapter 31This story was absolutely amazing. The pacing was amazing, and the characters never seemed to lose their personalities. Good job. |
 Hazel Maraa 2008-08-03 . chapter 31Ok, know what was weird? When I was reading the chapter "Over My Head" the song by The Fray with the same name came on (shuffle, that is, which is why it was weird).
So basically, I loved this a lot and I think you did a really flippin' good job with it.
Cheers!
~Hazel* |
 Halle Alexis 2008-07-18 . chapter 31i loved it |
 DayDreamer0109 2008-06-26 . chapter 31I really loved your story. Great Job. I'm so glad Casey and Derek are together and that little Marty is back at home where she belongs. |
 Joseph Santiago 2008-06-26 . chapter 31ah its over |
 splenetic 2008-04-16 . chapter 31I have just sat and read through this entire story (yes, ALL of it) in one go. My head aches, my eyes burn, I have a severe cramp in my left shoulder, and I cannot wipe this goofy grin off my face for the life of me. Hah.
But yeah, fantastic job. Honestly. I immensely enjoyed the slow build-up (what's with the lack of slow build-up fics?! much love to them) and they were both so completely in character that it totally threw me off kilter for a moment when they kissed. I have to admit, during the middle chapters I did feel that the romance was pretty much entirely one-sided. Thing is, though, when Derek finally kissed her all the subtle little hints you dropped prior kind of added up, making my eyes go all wide, muttering, "Oh..."
Aside from Dasey, I loved Marti. She was just adorable as always, especially as a fairy. Great job on that. You wrote her naivety well, along with her constant growth in maturity and understanding.
Anyway. I'm rambling. In layman's terms: Your fic was amazing. |