oh my gosh i nearly screamed how cute it was which would be bad since its like 3:00 am SQUEEL(sp)

aww this is so sweet ive read this story so many times but it just doesnt get old.

disability? looks like u spelt every thing right to me good job

Great job one of the best stories ever un-like the other stories that all have the same plot

That person had no right to pick on you your story is very wonderful and I can't wait to read the rest you are doing great keep up the good work even if your not good at gramar I'm not that good at gramar either so don't fell bad just forget about that jerk you are a wonderful writer in my oppinon
~Jessica (gaasakuandkibainorock)

If thats the way you react to every flame you get, you are never going to be a decent author, because lets face it, no matter what not everyone is going to be happy with what you write.

Instead of taking flames to heart, just delete the pointless ones, and think about the ones that have actual reasons. For example, if this person didnt like your grammar, instead of getting all upset, look around for a beta, saying you have a disability in writing wont really cut it.

this cookie () has no idea what he/she is talking about. this is my second time reading this story, (sorry if i didnt review before i didnt have an acount) and i love it. there may be a few grammer mistakes (i didnt catch any (not that i was looking for any) nobodys perfect, thanks for writing this story i really like it.

Wow you burned his/her Ego good XD. you go girl...boy? >.

no way. your fic and sequal are amazing and ive seen worse spelling so i dont care too much.

Your story is really go so don't let Cookie or anyone tell you differently. Not everyone can have great grammar and I got what you meant even if the words were wrong which is good. I've never seen a person that hasn't messed up a word or two so Cookie needs to remember that when someone wants to start criticizing them and I think your story has a good plot so keep writing.

o.m.g so good. i absolutley love your story. are you sure our not an actual auther? really good love gaasaku naruhina nejiten

i love this story

lizard tongues and gizzards..??
O_o?

amazing. this is a great story. oh and for how people say you suck at grammar you can just read it over for mistakes. great job. can't wait to see what story you do next.

Aw! I love it, this is the kind of story that I like to read. Don't listen to anyone who says that your grammar is bad, I've read MUCH worse. They give me headaches when I try to read them, but I love yours. I know how you feel (because of my brother)...Great job!