WOW!

really good. there's nothing here that i would change although i would've liked to know what exactly happened when perry confronted Clark. how they talked, responded etc. you know?

lol. when i was reading about jason and how he was not that happy because everything is going so well and anticipated that something might come along to mess it up...well...i think that too. hehe...do i need Kate's counselling?

waiting for the next chp!

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i absolutely loved this story, i am so glad it was a happy ending. also i was wondering if you could write a one shot or something with clark and perry discussing clark equals superman as you have it set up in the chapter if you didnt already write it.

I vote BJW for 2008 awards. Good luck!

Yeah! An update! And an amazing one at that. You did really well with this. Please continue!

YAY. I read this last night and again tonight and finally have a moment to review. Where to begin? I loved the whole things with Jimmy and the rumors, that turned out to be real. Jimmy's such a fun character and I'm always happy to see him included in a story, and you did a great job with him.

That whole thing with Perry was also fantastic. I loved how he pulled Jason into his office after the anouncement was made, and told him about what Richard had said, and then what he learned about Clark. You wrote Perry perfectly here and I love that he retired with a Picture of Superman, and that he and that they are friends.

Jason and Kate having another baby is great and I loved how she told him and then how she revealed that Lois and Clark already knew. I also love how Jason returned to the fortress and how you explained all of that, how Jor El was able to talk to JAson because Clark had reprogrammed the Sun Crystals. In the end everything turned out well for them and I loved it all. Sad to see it go, but I'll likely do what I do with Shadows and re read from time to time. Great work here

What a perfect ending to a wonderful story. I'm glad Jor-El and Jason were able to settle their differences. I hope you continue to write about Jason and Clark. I love their relationship. So, what will you be doing on December 12th? I remember you commenting in some of your earlier fanfics about The Lion and the Lamb, the other story you were working on at the time. I had not heard of Twilight at the time. Now of course I have and I can't believe you started Twilight Lexicon. You have excellent taste in movies and in books. :)(if I do say so myself) Thanks again for finishing this story.

Wow, what a great ending to a fabulous story! I'm happy that everything has been resolved, and that Clark and Jason seem to have finally mended their relationship. And Kate's pregnant! :D Great job with this, it was truly wonderful, and I look forward to reading your future stories! :)

Oh... it makes me kinda sad that it's all over now. Beautiful ending though. I love little Eric's curiosity, and I can almost imagine Jor-El's AI almost scolding Clark towards the end. These poor guys have really been through it haven't they?

But thank you for the brilliant story! Looking forward to any possible writing in the future!

XJaxX

Congratulations! Doesn't it feel great to finish such a long story?

I really enjoyed Jason's conversation with Perry - and it's wonderful that he now knows the secret as well.

I also love the sense of the story ending yet just beginning that you have created with the final scene. That's really my favorite sort of ending!

Very nice, and quite flawless! I'm really glad that you could update again. I love endings, even though I often want the story to go on for much longer. I shall be waiting for the side stories you write on you leisure. I loved this story, you're righting is, (as Daffy Duck would say) impeccable.

and it's finished... I must say that I really liked this story, how things changed as years went by and how Jason is now happy and has a family :)

thanks for giving us this fic...

Only one thing that bothers me, otherwise it is perfect: Since when did babies/children go around tawking wike this? It's kind of silly, sawt I saw a putty tat...

Well done. A very nice ending to the series.

oh my gosh! I cant believe its all over! This has been a hectic ride, but a magnificent one. I am absolutely in love with this fic, the voicing, the descrpitions, situations, plots, especially the entire character of grown up Jason. Thank you so much for writing such an original, excellent piece. Your work astounds me. Congradulations on such a brilliant story!

THAT was a marvelous ending to the twists and turns of this piece. Thank you.