Good story.

Aw...you should make another oneshot as a sequel called The Morning After.
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Well done. I actually felt that Harry and Hermione kept their personalities, which is hard to do in these stories sometimes. I was just having problems with the dialogue by the end...you would have something in quotes and then say something about harry but it wasn't him that was talking. Just a little confusing.

I thought the story was very heartwarming and it felt real. Good job.

Aw, that was so good and cute! I loved it. I also loved the pairing! It makes me happy to read a really good Harry/Hermione story. ^_^

ttfn!
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Nice one-shot, Hermione's tenderly care for Harry was quite realistic, something I can picture her doing with Harry. I believed Harry and Hermione would have gotten together but the sixth book proved me wrong.

cute!
loved it =D
hehe so there ginny *pokes out tongue at ginny who scowls and stomps off*
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so swet!
love it!

That was a very good one-shot! Although I think both Ron and Ginny were both being **, but besides that it was great! Good job!

another very good H/Hr keep up the very good writing

That was really cute. I see Hermione helping Harry liek that. Tough I also see her forcing her way in first. lol This was really sweet. Til later readings

update... pls.. :D

I liked very much!! Things happened too fast, but it was lovely

I like the story. This is a plausible and lovable Hermione.

But I have some trouble with the mechanics. Hermione takes out some clothes and turns around, then suddenly Harry is changed? What does that mean? Does she strip him and dress him with her hands? I imagine not; that would be very out of character for her at this stage in the relationship, and Harry would respond interestingly. Does she cast a spell on him? If so, why the turning around--was she turning to face him, or was she turning away to give him privacy? Why would that be needed for the spell? Or did he change his own clothes the Muggle way while her back was turned?

I also have to think Harry's head is too heavy to rest on Hermione's neck without hurting her... or at least without his thinking he was going to hurt her, which would be enough to stop him from doing it in the first place.

One more thing: It's nice to see Hermione described as "fiery." She is, in her own way, and flame-hued hair is not a very good reason to make that word the private property of Ginny Weasley, to whom it is so often applied.

very nice and very sweet

It was good... maybe another part? Ginny's reaction. I'd actually love to hear the twins reaction first. Thats just a suggestion though its really up to you so um... Please! Really enjoyable and fluffy