wow O.O I don't think I've ever read a fanfiction where Cloud can seem so manipulative, but still so sweet and sad. You kept him in character, but molded him to your plot. Great job^.^ can't wait to read more!

Hugs and Kisses
LPGurrl

You should continue this...

Oh wow, usually I don't like Sora/Cloud stories but this is AMAZING.

You just opened my eyes to a whole new pairing, thank you!
And the whole 'forbidden' theme is very enticing.

Cloud must have been in a whole denial stage before, but I'm starting to think Riku suspects something.

Update soon!

I hope to all that is wonderful in the world that this story will continue.
Its the most unique story I've ever heard.
PLEASE UPDATE?

First off, holy god, this fic is amazing! It is written so well, I'm even into them being brothers, which I never am! All the steamy scenes are kick-**, leave me wanting more! If it's not too much to ask, could you please update? Its a crime to leave something this good unfinished!

please update... it's been... so long...

Howdy there! Great story! I was also just wondering smething about Leon, assuming he's going to be in the story. Is he going to go after Cloud or Sora?

Dear god i really hope you haven't discontinued this story, it is incredibly well written and I can honestly say that I have never read a story of this type which is written in such a great way as this.

I've noticed you have well over 100 reviews for three chapters alone, it is really disappointing to see that this story hasn't been updated in over a year and it is unfair to us readers who love quality stories as this which are left unfinished. I really hope you update this soon or even let us know if you have discontinued for good, I hope that you haven't though. Congrats on writing a story which I think is a risky topic but making it sound completely hot! Cloud and Sora = yummy, but please don't leave this hanging.

wow..never imagined a Cloud/Sora pairing could be that hot..and incest to boot xD

well i guess anything can become appealing when it's written as well as this story is!

i look forward to the next update

Update?:3
Please??


...very adicting...@w@

Oh, I do hope you continue. The intrigue is addicting. I realize it's been over a year, but that would make the miracle of a knew chapter even more delightful.

That was absolutely intense, and a lot more realistic than I think most of the incesty fics on here tend to be. I love the angst. I love the... everything, really.

Heh.
Can't wait for Leon to come into the picture 8D

Cloud is so sneaky :D
This is so good! I really hope you update soon!

-Joh

Beautiful.

Twisted, yet so inconceivably perfect.

Please, do miss this story again. Agonize over it's incompletedness just as I am doing at this moment. It's so wonderfully written and perfect and full of turmoil and GAH.

SAD ORPHAN FACE.