I SWEAR BY THE THREE THAT THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ X3 I sure hope Twilight Princess gets you back in 'writing mode', Zelda and Link are so CUTE! ^_^

WOWZIES! I LOVES IT!

Your stories are frikkin AWESOME! Incredible! Outstanding! Astonishing! Notice how all of those UNBELIEVABLY positive words begin with vowels. I need one with an E... Ah. EXTRORDINARY! That'll work. XD

I can't wait for your sequel!

Great job with your stories! I'm a big fan and wonder to myself why more people don't read your stories...well I'll leave you to your writing

can't wait for the sequel

I'm looking forward to the sequel, but I think you should heed this advice so as to not do the same things I found irksome in your previous two stories:

- No Dune references. The whole thing with the Shai-Hulud and the maker hooks made my eyes bulge out in a great 'WTF!?' moment.

- Make Link's challenges more challenging. In your stories, Link is never defeated by an implacable foe; instead, he just gains some new power or magic item that wastes the villain in a few paragraphs. On that note:

- Don't make Link so overpowered. The part about him using only "a billionth of his true power" made him seem like another Goku: and why would he even need Zelda's help if he could just go 'Super-Saiyan' and "effortlessly deflect" the last boss' attacks? And then when Link busts out his hyper-time spell and just completely wastes Majora, the victory didn't seem too satisfying.

- Put in some more unexpected twists. The story was too predictable: Problem arises, hero is summoned to quell problem, he beats the four temples, has showdown with Majora and wins. Problem solved. Maybe during that time Zelda is accidently killed, and Link has to go on a 'side-quest' to revive her, weighing the choice of saving the whole kingdom or just a single soul? To save one he must lose the other. this is the kind of choice a 'true hero' must face. Just look at the Spiderman movies.

Well I think that's enough for now. I'd sure like to see how the wedding plays out, but please don't make it predictable with the all-too-doe-eyed Zelda-fluff. Maybe some old enemies show up and crash it, making ominous prophecies of the marriage being unsuccessful or Link dying. Whatever you decide to do, just make it dramatic!

Peace!

Aw, what a sweet ending! (baring Caspian, of course)...

A wonderful story. I truly enjoyed reading it. And I KNEW there was going to be a sequel to this! MUAHahahahahahaha...gr, I can't wait to read the next one!

Hey, Writer With No Name's Zelda Muse! I am in desparate need of decent Zelda fanfiction to read! Get the Writer back on track, huh?

Viva Twilight Princess! I can't wait to play that! (even though I've found every cutscene, including the ending, on the Net already, but still...) Hopefully it'll give you some ideas, huh?

How you managed to do a great retelling of both games in just nine to eight chapters whilst adding origanality i will proberbly never know. It was a great story and i look foward to the time my wraiths tell me you have writen another Zelda story.
Until that day goodbye
Dark Raku

Great ending! I love this story! This is the best Zelda story I've seen in a long time. I hope you write a sequel!

Anime Wildfire

Hey, another great chapter! Nice battle!

Personally, I was hoping more for an actual battle between Link and his shadow, you know, like a few sword clangs and then maybe some poetic dialogue...

I also felt that the Link proposing to Zelda, though very romantic, was a bit predictable. Zelda knew it was going to happen, so I think that the scene lost some of it's spontaneity and drama. But that's just be me--I guess I just like the idea of a proposal being completely spontaneous so there's no anticipation or expectation of what's to come.

And that can't possibly be the end of Caspian...you've got something up your sleeve, ADMIT IT!

THIS WAS AMAZING! I LOVE IT! You are an amazing writer! Keep up the amazing work!

Anime Wildfire

“If I flew, I could cross.” Zelda observed. “But I can’t carry you; how would you cross?”

Oh, if Link only had his hook-shot! Ah well, great chapter. The pacing flows nicely. Is this story going to be rather short as Link has already 'beaten' 2 of the 4 temples?

great chapter as usual and a really cool way to beat Majora and what happened at the end to Caspian was duely needed good job. I hope you keep this up because it seems right to countinue.
Until we meet again my friend.
Dark Raku
Also chapter four of my story is up.

good chapter again, very well writen. How do you manage doing a dungon in one chapter it is cool, i know i'd never do it. Abnyway keep it up. Oh and thank you for your advice it got my brain ticking over time and i think i came up with something. Anyway i like the new powers you keep granting Link although i hope the final battle will be harder for him. Until next time.
Dark Raku

I'm still disappointed with how easy the fights tend to be for Link. Whenever things look even slightly difficult, he gets a new power that allows him to take things apart in a whole new way. Granted, they're cool powers and all, but the lack of conflict is rather annoying...

Anyway, your storyline is still really good. I enjoy reading you story even if Link doesn't have any real problems.

Nice,
Rex

I've noticed alot of people saying that they don't think link and zelda's relationship is realistic. I don't know if I agree or disagree...but I still like it the way it is. It's the kind of romance people dream about. Plus, they had that fight at Eletale, so not everything's perfect. But I suspect that something's going to happen later on to make their relationship not seem as fairytale perfect.

Oh, and I have 2 questions:
The Writer with No Name...isn't that a name in itself? ;P

and

Runic Tunic, I'm curious as to what right you think Link has to exert this "masculine power" over another person.