A fabulous story! But you're stopping there? You can't DO that!

Or at least write a sequel. Suzie becoming a "volunteer"-does this mean she has Time Lord (sorry, Gallifreyan) blood in her somewhere? Now that would make for a very interesting plot! (And the Doctor wouldn't be alone anymore. Which isn't to say she might not have some words with the Doctor once she finds out his prior friendship with Jack, but still...)

10 out of 10 stars for this chapter. More, please?

A) All time lords/ladies are dead all taken from existence in the Time War.

B) Suzie never knew the Doctor

C) How does she know about the Time War caus Jack doesn't say

Well written though.

SG