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Tigger-dah-Muse
2008-08-28 . chapter 60
oh a note: "radek handed her *A* laptop"
ahem...
ah! where to start... it was a nice long chappy :D i love the whole joy ride thing ;D jeez that packing scene sounds so familiar... the whole "aww" thing was kinda unfit for a big guy tho... wtvr. i luv the video! michael and rodney and john... such fun! and i LOVED the egg line :D !! very lovely ending my dear! other kids eh? *bats eyelashes* can't wait! been wonderful! congratulations Madame on your completed work!
sincerely,
dah Muse
Commodore Norrington
2008-08-27 . chapter 60
OMG...can't really believe it's over, really over...Even though it was technically over for me like two days ago, now it's like...no more posting...wow...

anyway, it's a GREAT ending to a GREAT fic. You wrap things up really well, nice mix of nostalgic flashbacks and hopeful looking forward. :)

It's been an amazing ride! Thanks for taking me along. :)

(You know what's weird? We only *met* - physically, I mean - in December of '05, like four months before you started this bad boy. Crazy, huh? Aiden is like a metaphor for our friendship...)
Commander Lorne
2008-08-27 . chapter 60
the journey is finaily over and what a great story it was, i think you should take a short break after that long fic. congrats!
Soccer-Bitch
2008-08-26 . chapter 59
amazing! loved it!
Soccer-Bitch
2008-08-26 . chapter 58
awesome chapter! loved it!
Tigger-dah-Muse
2008-08-25 . chapter 59
squeedle! fun-ness... i could totally like *see* rodney and zelenka reading their papers :D and lukas was so cute! i luv aiden's perspective on his parents joking, it amuses me ^.^ not the fighting bit, but the other bits ;D and i did like the end of the fight where they were teasing each other :D very fun m'dear! can't wait for the last chapter, and yet i can... u know what i mean ;) luv ya! ttfn, tata for now!
sincerely,
dah Muse
Commodore Norrington
2008-08-25 . chapter 59
Oh, the song is perfect! Well done. :D

I like this chapter. It ties up some loose-ish ends, and we get to see Lukas again! For a significant amount of time! :D I love that boy.

Can't believe this baby's almost over...
Commander Lorne
2008-08-15 . chapter 50
who is louies mother? i can't remember who she is.
Tigger-dah-Muse
2008-08-13 . chapter 58
a thousand apologies for my laziness in not reviewing the past chapter and this one till now, there was so much fluff and fun it was hard to single out one or two things that i adored ;D i don't understand the whole tatoo thing, but now i see how ur starting to end it ;) although i can't help but wonder why u would stop at 59 chapters instead of the nice round 60... (sry that's totally a monk thing just ignore me o.O ) anywho very nice i've enjoyed these two chapters - tho have terribly missed madame's presence ;) the end looms near... ttfn tata for now!
sincerely,
dah Muse
Commodore Norrington
2008-08-07 . chapter 58
I do hope the story alert is fixed. :/

I really like this chapter. :D Dude - you're like on this upbeat streak! There hasn't been an angsty chapter for...a long time! :D Not that angst isn't wonderful, but it's nice that they're finally getting a break. :) Well, except for Evie's poor knee.

I like the father-son bonding. :)
Commodore Norrington
2008-08-01 . chapter 57
They're all growing up! Wah! But they've been raised so well, they'll make very competent adults. :)

Kyle and Terena are sweet. Congrats to Aiden! Poor Evie; poor Shep...
Tigger-dah-Muse
2008-07-10 . chapter 56
tee hee! this was cute! i love the "dad" bit at the end, and the "broo" made me laugh :D kyle and terena are fun too ;D vera nice fluffy chapter! and i must say two weeks is an unacceptable amount of lag time! *wags finger* wtvr... neways keep it up m'dear! ttfn, ta ta for now!
sincerely,
dah Muse
Commander Lorne
2008-07-10 . chapter 56
thanks for using my review and i thought that the part with ronon and telling his daughter about his scars was really something he would do. great work.
EmSyd
2008-07-10 . chapter 56
Awesome.
Soccer-Bitch
2008-07-09 . chapter 56
awesome chapter! loved it!
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