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Reviews For: Christmas Letter

mellombror
2007-10-17
ch 1,
abusethats one heck of a good story, i really liked it, keep up the good work

thanks for writing it :)

chris
Troll99
2006-11-07
ch 1,
abuseIt's been so long since I reviewed a Rommie/Dylan story that I almost forgot, there are still some authors out there, who like this pairing too.
I think that the idea of this story is very nice, it's the way (at least in my opinion) this relationship could (and maybe should?) have evolved. OK, we all know what happened later, so... it's no use crying over the spilt milk.
You handled the idea very good, perhaps with a bit of exaggeration concerning the emotions, but nevertheless, I liked it just the way you wrote it. Thank you for this short, but very sweet and refreshing story. I just hope there were more of its kind out there.
Benesound
2006-11-03
ch 1,
abuseGood story.

I do think that Rommie over reacted a bit toward Harper.
"Rommie glared out him, “Move it before I break it off.”

I would understand her reaction if Harper had placed his hands somewhere inapropriate or even said something suggestive. But Harper seemed to be honestly attempting to comfort or reassure Rommie.
"Harper put his arm around Rommie, “You have all of us, and we’re your family now.”

Other than that, I liked the story.
squid109
2006-11-03
ch 1,
abuseNice bit of early season Andromeda and how things might have been.
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