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| Cloner4000 2007-05-24 ch 1,  | abusewow...this is great..Snipers they are hard to write about. I was kind of interested on how he was saved. But he didn't die, that's a bit resfreshing.in a positive way of coarse. The action seemed perfect, well written well thoughtout. Without making him looking like Rambo too. Great work and inspiration for me |
| Sniper001 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI read this story because of my name and I am really pleased that it was pretty god damn awsome...I do german in school and we haven't really covered stringing words together like that so cheers for the translations...so overrall I thought it was an awsome story!! |
| CloudReader 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed how you chose to write this story, going back and forth between scenes in the past and present. It was effective, fleshed out your main character well. |
| Sir Dr. Pinkleton III cubic 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, it indeed reminded me of Medal of Honor. Very real, and very appreaciated =) |
| Gforce member45 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseVery well done, i aplaud your fine writing. It was awesome. |
| wozah 2006-11-17 ch 1, | abuseWazap dude! HAHAHA. Jesus, been a long time since I logged back in. Nice story mate really, no ** or anything. The details are superb. Keep it up. |
| GTEX 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abusegreat story man. I liked how you made it into a letter and the fluency and the believibility of it. But, I don't remember the Springfield being a bolt-action rifle, because I've played Medal of Honor: Frontline the springfield in that game wasn't a bolt-action, I don't think that EA Games would mess up on something like that. But, still, it was one of the best storied that I've seen and have had the pleasure to read on this site. Keep it up |
| Trueroman 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story. I'm glad you wrote quite a piece of art such as this. The detail, the action, just the way everything seemed to smoothly flow from word to word, it just gave it a life of its own. I can't say i've read anything of yours in the past, but by far, you've approved and dug yourself a rich well. Sad to here though you may be writing less to no new work at all. Anyway, good work with the story and good luck in life. --The Pencil is only as sharp as the wielder |