great story construction. Nice conflict and resolution.

Wow... what a History.. I liked it very much...!

Congratulations!

Please! I need more!

Very nicely done. i enjoyed it thoroughly!

I loved your story it is very good, exciting,interesting, suspencefull, and sad at the same time. I would love to read more of your stories, and I will. Keep writing, I love your wotk, you almost made me cry at times, very very good job.

Drat! I think I'm gonna cry again! Really great story, I'd like to read some more of yours.

You're the best. Man, this is so good, and its hard to believe that I'm the first to review this. Dratini, Drat, Dratini! Bye-for-now.