great story and ending, I'm glad you ended it like this, although I doubt I'd hate it even if it did turn negative. I can't remember if I reviewed for the first story in this set so if I didn't then I loved it aswell. Keep up the amazing work on any other projects

I haven't started reading yet, but I KNOW this will be great.

love the story update soon

great story!

In all honesty the story may not have had a complete ending, but it was enough to leave us happy :] I personally loved the entire story xD It was wonderful. And I DO know what you mean when you say that the connection for the story is gone. That's what happening with me and one of my stories. It's not very fun having to force yourself to keep writing and it makes everything bothersome from both sides. Keep Writing!
~TwilightBorn~

Okay, I have a favor to ask...My computer is being retarded and so I can't see chapter 9. Can u PLZ send it to me? I was about to cry when it didn't work. It's not even funny. This is a great story by the way. Plz send the chap. Keep Writing!
~TwilightBorn~

i've never personally felt that way about a fanfic considering i've only written 2 fanfics, one i've only gotten as far as chap 1 and the other one i am only as far as chap 5 and my best friend and i started it together last year. we like them so far and enjoy working on them but we haven't really had time. but i know some other people who have felt the same as you with stories and i think that sometimes it is better to just stop cuz like you said you would probably end up killing off a bunch of people and we wouldn't want that. sorry that this one didn't work out for ya, but i love fate is bothersome and look forward to you continuing that one.

Opague,

I completely know how you feel.
I really like the story by the way.
I'm glad you ended it here and not halfway through the big event. That means we can leave the rest up to our imaginations...no more writing involved. And we even get to decide which way we want it to go =)

it would have been great if you could finish it but it is till great as it is.

x
love.for.a.lifetime

I do believe that you could have finished this exceptionally well, but I do understand what you mean. I have the same problem with every last one of my stories now, and I haven't gone nearly as far as you have. I completely understand, and in a way you did finsih it, but it was an excellent story, I loved it!

Very good! I have to finish (okay, I have to read) this story. If I don't I will literally die.

It was a really good stroy overall and i am sad to see it end. it does leave a lot to the imagination but if it's what you feel right to do, then it is the best ending we could ever get. :)

i do love fate is a both.it is awesome

271: Darn, and I thought this was a chapter from you. Oh, well. Life goes on . . . only to get killed in school . . . and then resurrected for the next test . . . and the process repeats . . . :]

[Isn't it ironic how I would put a smiley right after that little (slightly morbid) statement? And to comment on my own comment. I swear, even with my Random Diagnosis, it only seems to make it worse.]

please don't leave the story like that!! please!! but it was amazing! i can't wait to read more from u!!

love your story
are you going to finsih it
im dying to know what happens
pleeaase