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| jo1990 2007-02-04 ch 1,  | abuseBrilliant. A completely different way to Charlie whump and family angst. |
| Sushi Chi 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseYeah, it was a bit of a stretch, but I loved the idea! Great story! Thanks for writing it. |
| Patty 2006-11-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot far-fetched at all. More and more communities are sponsoring medieval fairs and jousting matches are one of the most popular events. I can't see Charlie's armour with a phoenix on it, however. If you'd had a big Pi sign emblazoned on it, then I'd think, "Yup, that's our Charlie". Kidding, only kidding !! Good job, I thoroughly enjoyed the story. |
| Hemel Lassie 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseOh...I enjoyed that. Sometimes, I don't care how realistic a story is, if it is fun and this was fun. It would have been fun to see how he got interested, actually see him learning (say, a la A KNIGHT'S TALE...with a right good shelacking happening at times). But the way you did it was really fun! An unusual hobby for Charlie! Yes! And with Horsies...I love horsies.. 'He really is a knight in shining armor.' Cool! |
| littlegirlelf 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseI Loved it! Being a horse owner and into the knights and their games, this story fits my personality perfertly. |
| ladybrin 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abusecute and it was a nice fic- i enjoyed it and sure didn't expect it |
| harleyteen 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseinteresting, good but interesting :) |
| maurbill 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseToo Cute! I absolutely loved it and not that big of a stretch at all. |
| The Silent Rumble 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuse> well that explains it > *Winks* |
| person 2006-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI would pay GOOD money to see that! Very creative. |
| Phoebe Dawson 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseHey, I liked this a lot. It was really cute. Don't worry about it being a stretch, it wasn't that big of one...one way to fix it would to have included some kind of math. Like he won all the events because he had calculated the angle of the lance and the speed of the horse...anyway, I liked it :-D |
| Katie 2006-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseO...Save a horse, ride a cowboy... |
| Taura Callisto 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseCute!! A bit of a stretch is true, but isn't that what we all do with fanfiction. =) |
| meganreeves 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely LOVED that! I liked the horse too! thanks for a laugh on a depressing day! |
| luvnumb3rs 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseAwesome little story. |