No rest for the wicked is the best! i like this one , how you got Red's POV would fit it to a tee. :)

Very interesting take on the scene; I especially found Red's thoughts nicely done, as was the description of both speech and actions of all characters. Great work, all in all!
Take care,
~September's Nobara.

I liked it, especially the way you do the children. In the comic, they seemed malevolent to me, and I like how you made them here. They want revenge more than anything else.