I love this story. Your right the they should show more how Yumi's parents fighting affects Yumi and Hiroki as I thank you for giving me and idea of what it might be like for them

I really like this fic. It was written very well. X3

I love Hiroki so much and you did nothing but justice to that little boy and his big sister. The relationship is perfect between them, it's amazing.

Great work Keep it up!

LabyDwell

aw, and an awesome ending too, "a world without danger"

i feel sorry for hiroki,

great fic!

Aw! I love this! Never seen one quite like it! great job, i love how protective Yumi is, she really is a great big sister. Great job

Rena

That was really good. Keep up the good work.

Aw I loved this story its so cute and it makes the perfect broXsis relationship!

This is such a lovely story.

Nice Angsty story. Did you know that i'm not any good at writing anything that doesn't have torture,angst or character death in it? The only other thing I can write is suspense

and i'm not good at that. I love anything that has any Angst or Horror in it. You name it, I read it. Great story!

This is so beautiful! Very inspiring, very creative, very deep!

wow for a short fic that was AWESOME not many writers can do that.

Amy

one word...beautiful!

Ahh, that was sweet. Nice job!

JapaneseFanatic

I do love it! Nice expoling outside of the Code Lyoko Gang! Keep it up the good work!