Adorable!

Good story.

Good story DD

Poor boys! That was sad... I can't imagine how much hurt Dean to know that he injured Sammy... But it wasn't his fold, anyway.

Well, I wish it was longer, but I liked it

See you around

Rosetta

I read this story eons ago when I first discovered fanfiction and long before I had an account. I found it again, enjoyed it as much as I did the first time, and just had to say - wonderful story of Winchester family love!

Brilliant.

I have read this fic a few times but somehow never reviewed so am correcting that error now!

Great teenChesters story, totally believable and in character. Could so imagine Sam deciding to sneak off to the Hallowe'en party but how unfortunate the best mask he could find was a werewolf one, just what their dad was hunting and Dean was watching out for! And poor Dean hearing and glimpsing the creature and taking a shot at it only to realise it was his little brother. Not surprised they had to move on and went to Pastor Jim's and for once, Sam didn't argue, knowing the quick exit was his fault. You got Dean's guilt perfectly, him keeping his distance from Sam because of it. And so fitting Sammy got them back in sync, falling asleep with his head on Dean's lap and the contact allowing Dean to get his first good nights sleep since the accident.

A great read, loved it as much as the first time I read it.

oh that was so sweet! I loved the ending. Great story, totally rocked. I have not seen one with that twist before, so It was excellent.

thanks!

wow, very touching... i almost wanted to cry

Great story!

loved it.

Very cute oneshot - love the whole idea, and the image of the two of them on the couch at the end:)

-kate

good story

That was great! Loved the ending. (I'm a sucker for brotherly fluff) Thanks for sharing.

I just wanna say right off the bat- Brilliant plot. *guh*

“And if Sammy tries to go to that dance you duct tape him to the kitchen table.”

After all that fighting, this is much-needed. *grin*

This one looked real. This one had been made by somebody who’d seen the real thing, or at least a picture. He checked the price and saw that he’d have enough left over to get some of the awesome-looking rubbery claws to go over his fingers. He could find something at home for the rest.

*shivering with anticipation...*

Sam checked himself out in the mirror as he heard the door bang shut downstairs. He had the best Halloween costume ever. His masked face in the mirror snarled back at him, canine teeth bared, hair sprouting from the cheeks, nose nearly a snout. He’d put his own thick sweatshirt under a ragged old sweater of Dad’s, and the layers made him look bigger, bulkier, kind of furry. Long, ripped-up pants over top of his jeans made his legs look thicker, too, made him look wild and rough; plus they covered up his sneakers.

*reading faster...*

He pushed down his nerves and shouldered the rifle, sticking the barrel up to the window screen and aiming at the figure below him. His hand shook as he pulled the trigger, and the bullet went wrong, just winging it instead of going through the heart. Damnit!

Sam was just about past the living room window when he heard the shot. He had a stunned second to wonder what was going on, if Dean was okay, before he realized that he was laying on the ground, that his arm hurt like hell, and the ground was cold, cold, damp soaking through his shirts.

Dean moved to put another round in, then froze at the sound from outside. Werewolves didn’t scream like that. Werewolves howled, growled. Whimpered even. But they didn’t scream.

*giggle* I love it. This is brilliant. I'm so jealous.

Dean held on tight, turning the arm to see that there was an exit wound to match the entrance wound.

Except a lot bigger, because exit wounds are large and messy... *grin*

Sam felt tears burning in his eyes and nose, and he knew he’d screwed everything up. He just wanted to go to the Halloween dance. He just wanted to be cool, to show up in an awesome costume. But now Dean sounded like he felt really bad, and Dad was mad, and they were going to have to leave this place, and everything was ruined. He sniffled loudly, and then the curtain around him opened, and Dad walked in.

Poor Sam. Whumped and ruined their lives, all in one fell swoop. lol.

Excellent idea, Embroiderama. Thanks for the ride.

emily

Sweet story, I love Protective!Dean :)

that was really good. I enjoyed it a lot