So no update in a long time, eh...
well if it means something, I really love your story!
I hope you didn't give up on it, and will hope for more chapters ;)

my mind is pretty much racing at this point lol tomoe u bitchy obsessed screwed n da head unloyal so-called woman! lol n damn reito! xP baka natsuki has to confess her feelings for shizuru hime sooner or later bwuahahaha i hope da inflitration n regaining da kingdom works out well! o.o

cool story

Ahh, this definitely isn't boring! Cliffhanger ._.
Are you going to update this anytime soon? Either way, I'm looking forward to it! :)

Ooh, I wonder if you're going to make Arika and Nina a pairing :]

-twitch- I've always hated Tomoe, but now, I hate her even more :o

Uh oh, badpersononthemove! Is Tomoe actually on the same side as Natsuki? o.O

Hahah, it sucks that Tomoe walked in on them while they were in that position :P

Ooh, interesting; Kingdom of Fuuka.. me like :)

nice fic!!^^

Awesome, very interesting can't wait for more chapter updates XD!

Great start! More updates please!

Upload soon D: Or I'll... I'll bite you. Hard :3

its not boring, in fact im really enjoying the story and would like to see it finished someday. so please keep up the good work, and keep writing... or else Shizuru will come after you for keeping her Natsuki from her.

Diana. -glomp- I'm sorry I didn't read this chapter sooner. I was afflicted with the Instant Pudding disease. Very bad.

'a certain blue haired girls'- girl's

'the younger girls reaction'- girl's

'the young knights'- knight's

You have it right in some places, so... -shrugs-

'Squeezing her eyes clothes'- closed. Also, the 'struggles' should be past tense.

'the knights meditation'- knight's

'Natsuki, why don’t you come into'- in too?

'but Natsuki wasn’t quite able to restrain herself that time'- the 'but' isn't needed there.

'Nao encampment'- Nao's

A different setting? How d'you mean? And yes, we're two of a kind. Angst with the happy. Anyway, glad to be back into this again. Poor Natsuki. It's a wonder Shizuru didn't burn too, but I suppose she's magical like that. That was fun with a splash of sad. Next! (where's karen when ya need her?)

Chapter 19 (well, officially 18, but eh)

Me likey ze disclaimah. 'Tis...promising.

'Obviously taken of guard'- off

Ah, Nina. How we love you and your...bluntness? -grins- Natsuki fell into another trap, it seems. Oh gah, no, mental images...guh. Darn my lack of sleep.

'Bring a manufactured blush'- Bringing

Months? Woo, timeskip.

'ministers as lords the land'- of?

'Dragging to growling shorthaired girl'- the

Sque. Interaction between those two (of the friendly sort) is always most welcome. I now have a giant grin on my face.

Ah, between Nao grinning and Tomoe speaking, shouldn't there be a page-break?

Lava Flow? Do tell. So, uh, if karen hasn't already found all the errors, here ya go. I'm gonna...go hibernate now.
~Naolin