Checked into your local insane-a-torium lately? In case you weren't aware, human females tend to normalize thier "cycles" when living with each other for long periods of time.
In summation, this fic was ridiculous, awkward, confusing, irrational, full of random characters and in general, full of randomness.
Keep up the great work!
Lorenfreak 6/14/04 . chapter 1
um, I read the first paragraph and then I saw the messy script form and could not get into it. When I read the reviews and stuff it seemed more like a place you made to get in touch with your friends and stuff. No offense, but it seems like you are not taking this seriously. Maybe I am misunderstanding you but that is my take. Um the idea seemed good, but if you are not going to take the time to edit or at least make the story understandable I don't know what you expect to people. It is kind of immature to also act insulted just because someone comments that they don't like your story. Sorry but I had to say that. If you put something here it is very unrealistic to thing all your reviews will be posotive. My 2 cents.
Random Guy 1/28/04 . chapter 9
Oh my God! This is the best thing I've ever read in Animorphs! When's the next part comming up? You guys are the greatest. Do you ever get to 10?
um...woah...Arbron and Toby? so don't see that happening...i totally skipped chapters 6 through 8, who the heck is Pequal? and Dareno was not evil, and I will hate you both forever and ever if when he comes back you make him evil! I think you should make Brian evil...or Jaina! why do you always pick the characters I like to be evil? and why is Zanlor such a loyal dork? he reminds me of Jake...or somebody equally dorky, no personality, I need to see whats going on now to write the burial! and ha Jenni! I read it! you guys better not make Dareno evil...why can't you make Katrinas new kid evil? No, wait, why did I suggest that? um...make Hope evil...yeah, I don't really like her, shes annoying, or Rachels kid, that would make sense if she was evil, having Rachels genesm, and Rachels a psycho...
Shorty Baby Cheeks 6/21/01 . chapter 9
Hey! The simming nine! I'd like to thank Jenni for sticking by my with my plots (no matter how stupid). We've got a really cool plot going. (for once!) And my little sister, Meggie is simming and loves it. (i'm so proud.) Yep. Soon we'll be at page 1000! Woo-hoo! So um.. yeah. I'd like to than Sean for *not* critzizing me for simming. (i know, i can't spell) and... wow. Oh! and I MISS YOU NICOLE! I really wish Nicole was back with us, Emily too. But Emily has moved on.. and Nicole moved :( So yeah... um... We miss you Nicole and love ya very much. We wish you could visit us sometime. Then we can sim. ::sniffles:: okay, i'm getting kinda misty eyed here, so i'm gonna go. okay. um. I love you guys and well... Simming 9 yeah! bye.
Lynn 6/16/01 . chapter 9
I can't believe you guys are still doing this. I liked this chapter!
Yes, Part Nine! Wow, was Clovis evil, or what? Thanks to Ali, without you, this entire thing could not be possible. Thanks to all you readers: we love you! And, finally, I must yell at Nicole because she never reads this! Thank you, won't you, thank you, movie sign!
::holds back a sob:: i love it...t since when were ali and sean having hot passionate...well you know what i mean..and by the way, ::bang, bang..spoon,bang:: i remember jenni telling me about that.
I finally read it, wow, I wish I wouldn't have, it makes me wish I was still there...I can't beleive you guys simmed me, isn't there a rule against that? its ok, I forgive you, seems everyobdy does it ::glances at Taylor:: I'm not *that* predictable! neways, it was really good, awesome job guys, although, it would have been much better with me ::sniff sniff::
Okay, I only got finished reading chapter two, but I must say "Bravo" has it's sweet time, but at other times, I couldn't breath 'cause I was laughing so hard.
Shorty Baby Cheeks 3/14/01 . chapter 8
ha! I love that ending! Now you readers will never know what happens next!