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| Reviews for Obvious |
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   Puckabrinaluver 5/11/13 . chapter 1No kidding, Ed. |
| CatsEyeFlashlight 11/27/12 . chapter 1 I've been going through all my favourited stories to weed out the ones I don't like anymore. I finally came across this one again and well, I may love this story more now than when I first read it! I felt I had to say something about it after it's been so long since I read the story last. |
| The World's Best Auror 11/5/12 . chapter 1 This was absolutely wonderful. I like how the theme really gets in the story. Your writing is really nice, simple and sweet. Thanks for a good read! |
| Anonymous Reviewer-T 3/5/12 . chapter 1 That was... amazing! Beautiful! Outstanding! Thank you so very much for this! |
| festeringlilies 6/10/11 . chapter 1 Denial!Ed is adorable! :) I really liked this, just like I loved "Weak Spot." Lovely! |
| RedWingedAngel002 6/29/10 . chapter 1 XD I loooove it! Ari chan |
| sheepeater 6/24/10 . chapter 1 Beautifully written, as usual. I love the whole concept of this. His character was just flawless. Well done. Always, Sora(: |
| Mejii 4/6/10 . chapter 1 So it's you again Yellow Mask You cruel ditcher! Stop ditchindg your stories I really love them! Hope nothing bad happened to you... Finish magic Doll Im craving for it... you make me have weird dreams... I'm a fan Of yours by the way love you |
| BornOnTheBreakOfDawn 9/27/09 . chapter 1 yes ed, you really are... this is a great story! really! i love how you incorporated the different manga scenes to ed's possible feelings for winry...and the manga scene you used for the ending here really fits! everything was perfectly outlined and laid out...nice work! XD somehow i tend to overlap now scenes from fma brotherhood and the manga...but there aren't so many differences since brotherhood is basing from the manga but somehow the 2nd series tends to emphasize more on the edward x winry possible tandem...they seem to be adding tiny hints to stress that... anyway, i enjoyed your story and i find it as a very good reading material. i'm really amused by it! kudos to you! XD |
| kenkao7rocks5forever 6/14/09 . chapter 1 Ah! I'm so lucky to be one of the readers who read this. Honestly. The way you described every thought of Ed in every single EdxWin moment in the manga is perfect - just perfect. :D Well-constructed, Correct grammar and such content - I love it. |
| ishmaranara 12/18/08 . chapter 1 A good outlining piece, and yes he is indeed. |
| alchemichelper101 12/17/08 . chapter 1 this is so beautifully written...LOVE IT... |
| Kalana Fox 8/13/08 . chapter 1 Aww, too bad this was written before the Periodic Table moment (At least, I think it happened after 58...), I would've loved to see how you would write Ed's thoughts on that, XD. Very nice and cute though. I personally like the manga a lot more than I like the anime. |
| Empress Adelaide 6/27/08 . chapter 1 wonderfully written. I like your style :) |
| GilbertDrone328 1/21/08 . chapter 1 Ah! AMAZING! |
