 ImCutePoison 2009-04-23 . chapter 1That was beautifill story.. Please keep wriring! |
 h 2008-03-15 . chapter 1 this is so nice! I think you should make into chapters! I LOVE SASUxHINA |
 Child of Emmanuel 2008-02-07 . chapter 1Omg!! -.-!! lol sorry..heh...that story just...eh...erm...ya sry!! that reminds me...well Sasuke at the begining...lol the way he acts in the begining lol that reminds me of...something I'd do...lol heh...but anyway yeah awesome story, great song chioce, and btw you did a REALLY, good job with Sasuke and Hinata's pertrayal to some things that people really feel and do, or (in my case) dream they had enough confidence to do.
And just alittle tip. You could really try reading stories allowed or having a friend proof read them or something b4 posting because I caught a words that you left out in places...so just a possible tip! ^^ heh I have problems with stuff like that too so ya...XD
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 punk-Him34 2007-06-26 . chapter 1cries)luv the songfic its amazing |
 xNeglectedxRejectx 2007-05-09 . chapter 1what do I have to do? wow...that's a good song! yeah! nice story! |
 acho0bl3ssU 2006-12-28 . chapter 1ROFL this FF is very ironic |
 katlyn anders 2006-12-03 . chapter 1 I thought it was heart warming and tuching and it tuched me you are a very good writer?!1 |
 suena 2006-11-29 . chapter 1God i wish i could write somethin like that! U made me a lil watery but im okay hahahahaha i really liked it hope to see a lil more of this ^^ |
 Lady kHOLIC 2006-11-16 . chapter 1AW, now that was definitly cute x3 |
 NarutoFan0326 2006-11-13 . chapter 1 Keep on writing!! It's good |
 kenshinlover2002 2006-11-11 . chapter 1I liked it, it was cute. |
 maya-papaya-passionfruit 2006-11-07 . chapter 1I...I am actually tearing up... I never do that except with beautiful stories... and this was beautiful... how touching... |
 HisaAngel 2006-11-06 . chapter 1WOW! I really liked this story. Sorry if I haven't been replying back to ya. Been busy with school and such. I really liked this one though. So cute! |
 NanamiYatsumaki 2006-11-05 . chapter 1Another moving oneshot!
I really liked this one alot!
Great job!
^_^ |
 DazziO's 2006-11-05 . chapter 1Aw.. that's such a cute fanfic!
Loved it!
Soo cute! xD |