I really love this title for your Bishie World story, it sounds mysterious and exciting! Holly is a very calm Trainer I see, one more likely to think over things than randomly jump to conclusions, which should make for some interesting chapters. I wonder how her relationship with Ike and Gary will progress, especially with the mystery of the pink-haired girl Ike pretended not to see! I like the different Bishounen you included so far, even though I've never seen or read Air Gear, and I wonder who else will show up. Emerald City was a funny choice for a town name-is it just like the one in "The Wizard of Oz"? One other question I had was, what rude hand gesture did Ike make earlier and why would he do that? Wasn't he trying to be nice to Holly or was the act unintentional? Anyway, I really enjoyed your first chapter and I can't wait to read more about Holly and her adventures!