oh.

that was reakky profound and beautiful and sad and sweet and... I don't know. all I know is I loved it.

Wow. This story is like shattered pieces of glass, which shows how remus is feeling about everything. Your story rocks.

Beautiful, exquisite,touching,sad...

There are no words to describe this story, it is art and passion and beauty and simply amazing, with the sharpness of crystal-clear diamonds and snowflakes...

israeli-american

nice.

no death to u, u said more, yes?

:D

This is really well written. The style is good, and the characters are perfect. there is a little bit of confusion around the middle, when they were fighting (I'm not sure who it was dying, i think it was peter though).

Otherwise this is a really good story. Very much enjoyed it.

I loved it! This was my favorite line though: "...images of bandages and blood and black-haired boys swimming in his mind..." It really seemed to describe how Remus would feel on a morning after quite well.

That was... different... and I really enjoyed it.

Sad.

It made my heart ache.

Good story.

e :D

This is gorgeous, really. It seems to come across in shattered bits, suggesting what a sort of broken-up person Remus is (although possibly i'm reading too much into it *g*)

I love the suggestion, rather than point blank telling, you use, and i also love your spare use of language. This is one of the best fics i've read in a while, so thank you :)

Thats great! My only problem is the format that this is written in. I know it goes with the style of writing, but I would ahve probably put quotation marks around the spoken parts. Like I said, thats just my opinion. I loved this! I was great. A perfect way to sum up a life in a fairly short piece. Wonderful job! :D

-

some do is well.

That was amazing. I don't know how else to decribe it.

Beautiful.

You've done them justice.

That was beautiful.

I like how you didn't include quotation marks, that's different, but it gave this definite sort of effect.

& I loved it. Write more? please?

megan

as long as Remus isnt dead, i wont kill you. favorite chsaracter. Good story, very tender, very bittersweet. loved it.