This story definitely got my attention. I liked Final Fantasy V, but I thought it was pretty underdeveloped when it came to the characters' thoughts, so this made me feel a lot of sympathy for Krile (even more than I'd felt during the game, so this is a good thing). I like how you go through the transitions of pain, despair and hope. The dagger moment is good, especially because Krile herself almost didn't know what she was doing. It's brief, which isn't a flaw, but it does leave the reader hoping for more, stuff in between the scenes and what comes after. But I think this stands fairly solidly on its own because you present such a compelling view of Krile and her strength of will.

Sad...I like it. It's sad to hear you've stopped writing fanfics but I still love your fics that I've read so far. I hope you become like...a famous author or something. Live a happy life, and make a bright future ^-^ Farewell!
~Zidane's Dagger

Really great story, Krile. You captured the feelings and emotions of Krile's character at that point in the game. Very powerful. And yes, we need more FFV fanfics! Keep it up, dear. ^_~

I agree with you that there should be a lot more fanfiction about FFV. I really like the character Krile so I'm glad that someone decided to write a story about her! Excellent job!! It would make me really happy if you wrote more FFV fanfictions in the future!!

OH HELL YEAH!!!! Finally, ther's someone out there to write a FFV fic!!!!! Schnarz!!!! It's absolutely horrible how unappreciated FFV is out there in the world that is blinded by the newer FF's graphics and less than uninspired gameplay. Eh.
Call me old-school.

Very nice fic; you captured Krile's feelings well. And you are right about there being far too few for any FF's beside 7/8/9...gets annoying, don't it? ^_^ But then again, at least FFV has an animae set after the ending...

This was so sad and even though I don't know the characters, you told it from Kururu's point of view well. ^^ I thought she was going to take her life when she rose the dagger to her face until she realized she should not do such a thing. At least she was optimistic about what had happened in the end despite how difficult being optimistic at a time like that would be. Keep up the great writing. ^.~

I'm being responsible! See?

Hey, this is pretty good! You got Krile's feelings for her grandfather's death down pretty well. I especially like how it's even more descriptive then the game's scene! Good job! ^o^

Aww... I never knew that Galuf would die (stuck in quicksand desert)..... how sad....... nice story.... good job.....