ugh! U COPIED SO MUCH FROM ANGEL AND BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLAYER I HAVE SEEN MOST OF BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLAYE AND I'M GOING ONTO THE 4TH SEASON OF ANGEL MAN! AND I HAVE TO SAY U DIDN'T HAVE IT VERY FAR INTO THE SHOW BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLAYER WHICH I HAVE TO SAY WASN'T TO GREAT but besides that i think it was okay but only okay.

sorry it took me so long to review this was great

ok see i really should watch the show cos im way confused but i gess ill just read on to find out what the heck is happening

great chap read ya later

ooh, plot twist! an initiative branch, i like it. is marie a weed grower too, or is that part of locke's past to be ignored? just curious. the story is very good so far, though you should probably re-read to cathc spelling and grammar mistakes, such as that you used 'no' instead of 'know' towards the begining of this chapter. can't wait to read more though.

Now I definitely wouldn't have expected that. Locke with I wife...love it! Great chapter!

another great chapter cant wait for the next

Great chapter!

another great chapter

nice chapter, but not a huge amount happens. i can't wait to read the next chapter, did they already find the hatch? how are they going to handle a child vamp and a slayer?

another great chapter cant wait for the next

Great chapter!

uh oh. though generally the vamps don't really rise till the mext day. though that is pretty ambiguous. in the canon you see vamps rise from their grave (corpses aren't normally burried for a few days), vamps rise from the morgue and jesse and ford both rose the evening after their deaths. so 24hours generally. that doesn't really matter though.
and buffy doesn't know about kendra. that's bad. silly watcher and her "kill yourself so the world is safe" belief.
good story so far. i can't wait to read more.

Hey!

A great update of thre chapters! You seem to really have found the flow of the story and it's moving along! If this is the summer after the Master then Buffy has already died and Kendra was Called - however - I just rewatched Season Two and Kendra was a complete shock to Buffy. So for the purpose of your story, Buffy being stuck on the island is a real question.

I love how you have moved away from the show's storyline. To be honest I loved the fist season but never got into the second because it against Veronica Mars and after the first few episodes I just never felt the need to tape it.

I love how you made Delynn into a Watcher. I wonder if she'll take things into her own hands and try to kill Buffy, so that the monster can't kill her and the world will be safe. And Sayid being saved by a Slayer was a good touch.

Good work, keep it up!

great so far cant wait for the next chapter

hey this is really good i like it! please don't let anything else bad to anyone! is their going to be any pairings? please update soon