very well written. Good job! Laura/X-23 is one of my fav. characters. :D

Hi. I enjoyed this immensely. It's very simple, and yet very powerful. The finale is excellent!

I find it absolutely in tuned with her character: she knows pain, she reacts based on pain, she feels (or not) pain. Other emotions do not exist (or shouldn't, because that's distracting). If there is pain, then she can focus on what she is: a perfect weapon.

Very good, an enjoyable read. You captured a bit of X-23 into words.

Nice work. I haven't read many X-23 fics, but this was good to see. I loved this.

This is good...not enough X-23 fics out there...PLEASE do another one.