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| Rach Raff 2007-02-05 ch 6,  | abuseVery good story! I love the fact that Sara is at odds with Lady Heather. It really is something they should address at some point. In a way she had it out with Sofia so why not? Go sara...I love GSR! |
| GSRGeeklover 2006-12-04 ch 6, | abuseWhaah! I want more! MORE!! MORE! IT CAN'T BE OVER YET! PLEASE MORE?! :D *yes this is my irritating hyperself(A),,:P* |
| anneruhland 2006-12-03 ch 6, | abusenice story. I had quit reading at the end of chapter 2 not realizing that there were more chapters. So it was nice to see that the story continued on. I enjoyed it. |
| TDCSI 2006-12-02 ch 6, | abuseThe end. What do you mean, 'the end'? I don't think so. I was hoping to see some head butting going on between Sara and LH. Please consider continuing. It's a goog story. |
| ReCoGnItIoN 2006-12-02 ch 6, | abuseawesome finish! |
| ArieaLeighaGrace 2006-12-01 ch 6, | abuseis it over alreat I was atleast hopeing that you was going to continue up until Sara and Nick got to come home, but i enjoyed the story any way |
| odeepblue 2006-12-01 ch 6, | abusevery nice! thanks for a good read! |
| ArieaLeighaGrace 2006-11-27 ch 5, | abuseSo far so good. I have really enjoyed reading it so far. |
| GSRGeeklover 2006-11-27 ch 5, | abusewow.. Can't wait.. :O |
| odeepblue 2006-11-27 ch 5, | abusemore please! |
| ReCoGnItIoN 2006-11-25 ch 5, | abusehm...interesting! please update soon! |
| cabooklover21 2006-11-25 ch 5, | abuseMom, that was so his Mom. It had better have been his Mom *stares hard* Great chapter! |
| stareagle 2006-11-19 ch 5, | abuseChapter 4 was great - I am so glad they made contact again. Now Sara picking up the phone and Lady H calling- that was cruel but effective... Lady H's statement that she had not talked to Gil lately was hopefully supportive to Sara, and her concern was legitimate. Now the question is, how will Sara tell Gil of the call! Looking forward to more- thank you |
| odeepblue 2006-11-14 ch 4, | abuseloved the story! i think the sara you portrayed is very strong and independent. loved the characters, and the interactions with brass ;) i just wish their was a sequel so i could see how she gets better and they talk and he assures her everything is going to be ok. i just wish i could have a scene that showed griss and sara at home and heather calling and him blowing her off. telling her he was in love with sara and her hearing it... just some reassurence i guess! ;) |
| Severien 2006-11-12 ch 4, | abuseI think it's a great story... And I don't think you are portraying Sara as needy... you are portraying her as someone who is in love, but who is very much afraid of losing the one she loves. Especially since their past isn't that trustworthy, I think it's only normal she's jealous and scared... I do hope they'll find their way back to each other soon :) |