Aw...so sweet! I wish that we could see some sort of timeline as to how long it would take for Mariku to be deemed safe (enough) for society.

Tiers are levels of something. "The Chinese arrange their rice-patties on tiers on the sides of the mountains."
Tears are droplets of salt water that come from people's eyes when they feel sad. When people are crying, they appear "teary", not "tier-y".
Annoyingly, tear is also the word for rip, as in "Tear the cloth, don't cut it with scissors."

There's also some preposition issues in this chapter... Ryou would be "in class" not "on class". Sorry if my grammar-and-spelling Nazism bugs you. I know a lot of authors get annoyed, but I feel that it's my duty, as a reader, to let you know that your story isn't absolutely as perfect as it could possibly be (though this one is coming pretty close. Hooray for good stories!).

"then just before it couth him he fell through a black whole"
I think you meant 'caught'. Couth means... 'having manners,' sort of.
Also, in this chapter and once before, you used the word 'thread'. I'm fairly certain you meant 'dread' both times. Thread is a string, or a verb meaning to string, as in the action of putting a thread through the eye of a needle. Dread is a feeling that something bad is going to happen. Or, you could have meant threat, something that is dangerous. But I think you meant dread.

Anyway, it's an awesome story and I look forward to continuing it.

I wonder if you ever tire of my stream of never-ending comments? Well, I tend to comment on the most recent chapter or the end of the story, but I've done so on everything of yours I've read. I actually finished this story yesterday, but I was so sleepy by the end I didn't feel quick-witted enough to write a decent reply. I loved this story, it was unsual, with many interesting scenes- but once again you've written something wonderful. I hope that one day I can reach your level in skill. I think I'm a good writer, but you are nothing short of fantastic, my dear. Mariku was mostly in character, but I think he was a little closer to the mark in Hello?. Sometimes he seemed a little too sane, but it would be impossible to hold a relationship otherwise. If you would like any advice, I would suggest capatilizing the Y in "you" in your title. When writing in English, for titles that's proper grammer. I also believe it would look prettier. Thank you for giving me something enjoyable to do in my freetime! (again, I love you! ~<3)

-runs off to read lemon-

Japan allows like...something like a union. We have a few states in USA that allow gay marriage :D

Maine will be added in september! :DD I'm so happy ^_^

This is a weird kinda ending haha

haha, sneaky little Ryou

no, your kissing scenes don't suck

jaw is jaw, not yaw, and jawline is one word =)

gah! I find myself correcting your grammar all the time xD

oh ho! I knew he'd escape! XD

usually when in dreams you're being chased it's because you feel overloaded and things are piling up, it could also be you subconsciencely trying to avoid something

:3 I have a dream book xD

i remember how i got into your stories.. TDEL...xD

Anyways, feel proud, you got me addicted to a pairing I hated :3

Yay Deathshipping! :D

What lovable tale... I giggled like crazy as I read this story, which is a really good thing. It means the plot is interesting and well-written. It also means it's absolutely fun! Haven't read a story that makes me giggle in a while, good job!

it was good. :) im just reading again. i really cant help but feel sorry for toshiro.

oh dang. ...marik has the hots for ryou...and por toshiro!

wow i didnt know charlie and candy mountain was that old! i love that video..haha they stole his kidney.. i dont get that but it was hilarious.
anyways i told myself i was gonna read 2 chaps and ended up reading 4... *sigh* i need to sleep. i have a headache now. :D great story so far!