so sad, but I lived it

oh that was so sweet! love it!!

aw

Wow! That was incredible!

That was so good! I loved it! And I do agree that they are doing alright with this season so far...GSR-awesome!

I love this. It reads as authentic... very in character :)

Thank you-that was a great "what if" about Gris's "leaving
to teach" scenario! I like the hope in it-thanks!

CRIES...that was so sweet. More please? Sequel? Continuation?

Let's hope this is how things go down on the show...*sigh* I read the spoilers for this episode and felt my heart stop beating...I told my sister and she nearly fainted...when she snapped out of shock she threatend to quit watching the show if they took Grissom permentantly off...

Well, anyway, this story was very well written, and as i said before, I hope this is how it turns out.

I loved it. It was perfect. The angst and uncertainty is amazing and fit so well with the characters. And the hint of hope at the end was wonderful.

You're making me look forward to him leaving! I didn't think I ever would!

Wow! That was good. It's lovely and sad at the same time.
I heard some people talking about reunion story as a follow up on this chapter. That's an awesome idea. Would you please consider?

Okay, you actually made me cry. Real tears, the kind that are sticky and warm. That roll very slowly down your face and you don’t know whether to laugh at the ridiculousness of them or cry harder at the tragedy that you are ashamed to be crying them... k, now im going write another poem... Whatever, this made me cry. I am dreading Grissom leaving, but if its going to happen this is how I want it to be. Because it’s beautiful. Really well done.

I already miss him too, and then he'll be gone again.
Good story. I'm glad you didn't write him out.
Have you seen she says we'll be getting what we waint this year! YAY;)

This is very well written and in character. I only hope Grissom leaves on such good terms with Sara on the show! Are you planning on writing more, or is this a one shot?

Hey, I know you. You used to write fanfiction. All I can say is, if you can make me stomach canon GSR and actually feel inspired to write something, you're a miracle worker. I love this. I love that Grissom was really Grissom. Still an **. Perfect. You should write some more. Yeah. Do that. Please?