so sad, great writing

This remides me of Stephanie Meyer's New Moon.

Wow! This was a very powerful piece. Amazing writing, keep up the good work.

:O That did not happen! OMG! My mouth dropped. but it was good.

Aw...that's sad and awesome at the same time! *hands a gold star*
keep up the great work!
~E~

*cries*
i feel all emo now
that sounded exactly like the scene wear edward leaves bella in new moon.
is that wear u got ur inspiration

Incredible! The story truly comes to life as you read it. Simply marvellous. I love the entire bitter vividness of this story..and the ending just brought tears to my eyes! Marvellous story!

Hey That was really good!! I like it!! It actually was unexpected bucause of the introduction.. I'll give you a Thumb up!

That is so sad. It's a good story. I really like it. Good job. I hate having to say that. I sound like a teacher. I'm in high school! But I don't have anything else to say. Oh, and how is this an MirSan if they don't end up together? ^_^

WOW... how sad but very nice
I liked it in a sad
felt that way once but oh well
we all live on