Reviews for Neon Genesis: Angel 3: Redemption

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Latios151 2008-08-09 ch 13,	abuse--this is a review about all the NG:G series up to this fic-- You should get a medal, have a statue built in your honor and have your face put on coins. Seriously. Why? it's simple: -You've written a OMG fic series -This fics are all crossover -they are well written crossovers, with an excellent plot, which is not exactly something you find everyday -they are so well written, in fact, that even tough I've never watched evangelion, was perfectly able to follow them without getting confused just by reading the wikipedia page on the anime -actually, they're so well written that they made me want to watch evangelion, which didn't interest me before (right now evangelion is in my list of 'things I know everything about but I have yet to see/read/play' and this is thanks to you. As an Eva fan, you should be proud) -You've even written an HP crossover (which I'm now reading) -Heck, you even are a fellow Within Temptation and Evanescence fan! --Constructive criticism ('cause no one's perfect)-- I don't really have much to say here, but I spotted some typos and spelling errors every now and them, though I shouldn't be the one to point them out since English is not my first language. There's also some tense jumping at times. Also, in your older fics I noticed an overuse of the "he/she waited X to hit him/her... but it didn't come", but it seems you've already noticed it, because your newer fics no longer have this problem. --Thanks-- Reading you fics is an all involving experience. Some moments I was rolling on the floor laughing, other moments I was almost crying, but I always found myself unable to stop reading. Thank you. I hope you won't stop writing anytime soon. --Arael's fan club-- beacuse you gotta love snowflakes As I mentioned, I'm a fellow WT fan, and I found two WT songs that I think could fit Arael The first is 'The truth beneath the rose'. Some of the lycs don't fit, that's true, but I think the song on the whole represen't Arael's remorse for what she has done in the past pretty well. The second is 'All I need' which IMO could be used as the NG:A2 soundtrack because it describes Arael's love for Sentaro and her fear of rejection pretty well. Again you stories are awesome. Remember that. ;D Latios151 out.
Neferius 2008-05-30 ch 12,	abuseI know I shouldn't but I decided to review this story again. It's been about a year and a half and things have changed. Like I had said before, I would read the others once I read/watched AMG. I now have an extensive knowledge of AMG, which greatly helped read and enjoy these stories. Also, because I've read your Goddess series I further understand what was going on in this one, I was confused the first time through. I still have four more stories to go through before I have finished all of your current NGG stories. Almost there. Read ya Later.
Sailor Enlil 2007-10-14 ch 13,	abuseHi there! Yet another awesome piece of work here.
Kotetsu 117 2007-05-13 ch 13,	abuseThat was great
Anexsis Hirotomi 2007-01-08 ch 13,	abuseI still find it desturbing the whole reiXshinji thing...eep! Asuka Shinji Forever! Okay now that I've got my wild fangirlness out of my system I can properly review. Gabrielle Asuka Aida...the first thought that entered my mind was "that is the only time that Asuka and Aida should be in the same name" (don't get me wrong Kensuke is growing on me...too many NGE: Angelic Days) But I like the name. And the whole Asuka dancing reminded me about Kami-sama and Sayoko calling him grandpa. I can see it now. Yui and Yoko, the new Urd and Skuld. Let the legendary fighting beguin! But I should go and do suff... don't know what... oh wait I'm gonna go and figure out the "mystery" of the Black Witch. JA-NE!
Marcos Edson 2007-01-05 ch 13,	abuseOdd, but somehow I missed this update... Anyway... This as very good, nice to know SEELE learned a lesson they will never forget, if we can say such a thing given their current state... The Yui and Gendo was surely what most if not all of us wanted to see! And it's funny, years ago I considered writing an small short fic which would be much like what you did, my idea at the time was having Gendo and Yui at the beach, after 3I, and Yui slaps then leaves Gendo alone in his dispair... Beautifull pic-nic scene specially the burgers in fire, it just gave me a flashback of something similar that happened last year... eh, eh... I keep thinking of some story where all the AUs meet, sounds like some messy fun... :P All in all, this was great, I only still want to know how Arael ended up there, maybe you saing it for another one...? ;)
Neferius 2007-01-03 ch 13,	abuseI was unsure about reading this but I had no choice...Arael is my favorite angel (in a human form) for some reason. Anyway I was surprised by this story. Though I had to read it from start to finish in one sitting I didn't get bored with it and it kind of makes me want to read the first two but I know nothing about Oh My Goddess! so I may have to put those off for now. This was well written with some good little jokes and was pretty believable all the way through. Great work. Read ya Later.
Shinji Ikari01 2007-01-02 ch 13,	abuseYou need to make another part to this, PM me when/if you do
Barricade 2006-12-25 ch 12,	abuseKensuke bashing, Shinji fainting (the stud he is), Arael poking... In a word: W00T! The line Touji said about Kensuke - beautiful, utterly beautiful. Yui & Yoko should mention that to Sayoko when they get back. She'll die laughing while reminiscening about their high school years. Although it did feel a bit rushed in the first half, up to Yui & Yoko's appearance, but after that it settled down nicely. And Arael's talk with 'dad' nicely brought to a close, in my opinion, all of the problems/baggage she's carried over the centuries about her attack - she finally was able to finish it by herself (and not a clone of him, but the original). Last time she needed Sentaro's help, now she was able to do it on her own. Btw - I like the tidbit on how it was Shinji that gave Arael away at the wedding. I take it that Kami-Sama performed the ceremony just like between Bell & Keiichi, Shinji & Asuka, and Sayoko & Kensuke? One thing that is somewhat dissappointing is that you didn't do anything with Lilith in this beyond her being vaporized in the aftermath of Arael's destruction of Adam. As you stated in the main timeline (and hinted at in the actual IRL timeline) - Lilith never had anything against humans/Lilim, as they are all her children to a certain degree. That could have been a very interesting discussion had Lilith been able to 'morph' down into her 'human' form and talk with both Arael & Rei. That or reintegrated Rei into herself and become whole. Very good possibilitiy that Rei/Lilith might still be interested in Shinji (oh boy...) and be on humanity's side. Oh and being a grandma might also sooth her a bit too.
Zero Asakura 2006-12-24 ch 12,	abuseHi nice update hm... i guess Arael should wait to see what will the SEELE guys do in this AU world ryt? what about Mana? does Mana exist in this AU? wellz... good luck merry "christmas" (don't believe in it, but believe in many people that are part of it and do believe)
Marcos Edson 2006-12-24 ch 12,	abuseAw, this was a nice Chistmas gift for all of us readers, thank you very much, Slayer. :) Having Yui and Yoko coming in her "sister"'s rescue was a nice touch, not to mention all the gossip they let out... ^^ I hope we get to see more of this duo... There's not much else I can say besides I liked the whole story (although it seems we still get to see Arael paying this world's SEELE a visit...). And I hope we also get to see how Arael is welcome back home (and perhaps learn how she got in that world, too).
Shinji Ikari01 2006-12-24 ch 12,	abuseExcellent!
Marcos Edson 2006-12-19 ch 11,	abuse@Barricade: LOL... I just hope Gendo keeps his hands away of Arael, the prospect of him touching her baby, literally, scares me... I hope we get to see her have a talk to SEELE much like Mara when the same events took place... :) I like how Rei has become a teaser, in a way... I wonder how Shinji and Asuka in this universe would react if she started talking about their counterparts... ^^
Barricade 2006-12-17 ch 11,	abuseW00T! Arael gets to work things out of her system at long last! And a nice recovery for Ritsuko, who I thought got one of the crappiest (is that a word?) deaths in the whole series. Only Misato's death seemed worse. No, Gendo getting bit in half isn't bad, in fact I kinda laughed. Oh and will Arael say "Hi" to her mom? After all we do know that is exactly what Lilith is. ... Oh you devious man. If Lilith comes back from this universe to Arael's universe... LMAO. "Umm Sentaro, honey. I'd like you to meet your mother-in-law." 'Cuse me while I die laughing. ^_^
Marcos Edson 2006-12-10 ch 10,	abuseUhmm, do SEELE expect to eliminate Arael with a firing squad? Eh, it would be fun to watch... Afterall, "Worderboy" can do a big mess while in human form... :) Well, things seem to be getting in place for the final showdown, just one thing... "Wondermommy"?! Goddess, Urd and Yui just MUST learn about that! :D

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