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hakuchihiro
2006-12-22 . chapter 5
nothing much happened but it's still good
Yuehswind
2006-12-21 . chapter 5
Cute
Musette Fujiwara
2006-12-21 . chapter 5
Someone is going out... But she said she didn't date, well I guess that soo she will change her mind...

ANd poor Serena, I agree with both Syaoran and Sakura, she wanted to go but then her stomachache spoke loude, and that worked for Syaoran now he could take Sakura out to breakfast, and when the other teacher found out she will be furious...

I can't wait to read your next chapter...
SnowCharms
2006-12-21 . chapter 5
Sooner or later she's really gonna fall...really hard...update!
SnowCharms
2006-11-26 . chapter 3
Nice...so when r u gonna update? I can't wait to read ur nx chapter!
Rawrmumbles
2006-11-18 . chapter 3
DAM SYAORAN IS 1 HELL OF A PLAYBOI^^
Musette Fujiwara
2006-11-17 . chapter 3
darling... guess what was my favourite part...?

I loved how everyone told her to be aware of her boss little borthe and he was so annoying, how can't he take a no for an answer, doesn't he understand that word?

And then he dared to kiss her after settng some sort of date with someone for that same day at 8 o'clock... is he mental or something, it is like he doesn't even know that SDakura saw him in a car with another woman when she was applying to her job in that kindergarten...

I couldn't believe that on her supposed date she send her cousin, that was really smart of her...

I can't wait to read your next chapter...
krn5rul3
2006-11-17 . chapter 3
haha sucker
well continue
love it
hakuchihiro
2006-11-17 . chapter 3
you really update fast! like this chapter. LOVE THAT SONG! I've memorized it the first time I heard it... The lyrics is so sweet too... Oh sweet love oh hurtful slap!
dbzgtfan2004
2006-11-06 . chapter 1
This is a cute and sad story. Please continue. Sakura and Syaoran forever.
hakuchihiro
2006-11-05 . chapter 2
so far I like the story... keep it up! haha
mY pHoEnIx tEaRs11
2006-11-05 . chapter 1
o wat ish onna happen next? aw saku has a daughter...hehehe...how kawaii
plz update soon

forever tru

tEaRs11
Musette Fujiwara
2006-11-04 . chapter 2
HEy... this chapter was awesome, so she will work for his siter but tell me something why his sudden interest on her, why? He was with a older woman, than her, in his car... I think it is Meiling, but shouldn't he be with her... And not foolow his sister new employee?

I loved how although she blushes around him she still can find him annoying...

I can't wait to read your next chapter...
Musette Fujiwara
2006-11-04 . chapter 1
let me see if I get this straigh you begin with the present and will go back to the past and tell the story on how Sakura was so happy now... I loved it...

And I'm sure Syaoran is Aryssa father because of hair colour and eye colour... So what will be your next chapter be like?

And she prepare breakfst because she had a gut feeling that she would have company for breakfast...
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