i like this story, one of the few good ones written under SOTTP. but a question about Ericka: she's a bit forward with the mean things she says. 'i'd jog around the block if i was u to lose some weight' seems a bit forward to me.

I love this story! so good, plz keep going. can't wait for the next bit, update soon!
lizzy

Korea Gal,
this is such a sweet story. I'm sorry that you haven't been getting many reviews, but you must admit, Sisterhood isn't a really popular catagory. If you had picked Harry Potter or something, you'd get more reviews. But you didn't. You picked a catagory that you obviously liked, since u've written a few other stories on this topic.
I'm not saying this to critize, i'm really not. But don't you think you should write for yourself and not other people? I mean, who cares if you don't get many reviews?? Who gives? If you like writing this story, keep going. If you don't, then whats the point?
If you still need a beta, i'll be happy to help you out. I'm not that great myself, but i can give you a hand. My email is if you r interested.
A question about the last chapter: How did Vanessa know that the lawyer's card fell out of her parent's pocket?
So... yeah. I'd really love it if you could keep writing this story, because i like it. I'm not sure if you gave up, because you haven't updated for a while. But please don't. I like it, it's cute.
Thanks for reading!
hifo x x
PS oh yeah, MERRY CHRISTMAS!

Cool it's really good, dancing rox, little sisters don't. ha. good job
~DAA

This sounds cool but my advice is to come up with more stuff that differs from the original Sisterhood. So I think the rules should be different, and that could take the story to a new place... either way it sounds interesting though!

okay, thats totally my name!
lol

and know whats weird?
my best friends name is vanessa, and one of my 4 sisters' names is Alexis.

how creepy :|

but good story, i love it

It was a cute story :> I have to say that Alexis is my fave! Keep writing + post again soon- don't let it take away time from your other stories tho *wink* lol

this story has a pretty good idea, but maybz people didnt reveiw because it was too short. just one question - are the new sisterhood parallel to the old sisterhood (bridget, carmen, tibby and lena)? are they before or after them? and also because in the prologue its all about boys and things... mayb people wanted other things. its a really good story tho...
Siv