This is amazingly written and shows your incredible talent for writing. I've noticed that you haven't updated for a pretty long time, and I think that you should update again. Cuz this story is fantastic so far.

Keep up the great work and please update again soon. ^_^

~Taylor

Even though I know this is not what happened, I truly want Jet to live. The bond you have shown between these three is so strong, I want to beleive it could get him through it. Also, the reason for Longshot and Smellerbee leaving Jet to the Dai Li makes sense, tho my immediate reaction was that they had abandoned him!

Salute!
The narrator

O.O
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is that it or are you going to keep going?
PUHLEASE KEEP GOING!
BEAUTIFUL!

aww... *sniffle*

YAY! YOU LET JET LIVE! YOU... NICEIE!

Because Jet needs to live. And in about 20 episodes, the commercials will be going. "...He's back. Again."

I love, love the little mentions of Zuko. And that little line going "If the waterbender said she needed more water, he figured he better bring back as much as he could carry." It just really brought it down to as much as a realistic sense as one could reach in fanfiction.

That was actually pretty. Very nice.

I like this, it's well written and you make Jet's condition seem very believable, I can imagine everything that's happening in the story.

Aw... lovin' this...

Hmm, liking the story so far. Keep it up!

I really liked this. It's all IC and well put together.
*hands kudo* good job!

..This needs to happen. In the actual series. You wrote them as how I usually imagine them to be - communicating with glances instead of words, cause they were used to doing things that way.

Awesome work.

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You've given me the solid proof that i've been clinging to for a while that Jet will live!!
THANK YOU!!
i was physically sick after that episode, and i might even stop watching if they kill jet off... so thanks for that image of them saving Jet. Cause that's all i've got for now... Haha but i'm not some crazy loser... well...

Peace out and long live the hippies
Hippie Ellie

You're doing Avatar fanfiction? I hope you understand the awesomeness of this. That was good, BTW :)

I don't know what to say to this. All words escape me.
Yay for you.

Wow. Although if they did get Jet out, with the injuries he sustained, I doubt he'd make it until he could get fixed up.

Still... awesome detail.

There's still hope!