Wow, I can't believe that Shino actually told Ino Kurenai's advice at the very end. Perfect though, it was hilarious. -grin-

I really liked how this story was set up and written as well. You take some common knowledge and expand off of it in a very believable manor. It's seriously amazing.

On top of that, I'm in love with the fact that you put honestly real scenes into parts of it. Maybe it's because you're a guy because I don't know any girl that would actually write the main character feeling like they have to take a poop, let alone them actually doing so. This... embarrassed me when I was reading it, but at the same time it helped me realize that dude... everyone has to poop. Just because I'm not used to reading it doesn't mean that it doesn't happen.

I really liked the very beginning of this fanfiction also. You have a special talent for making the stoic Shino do incredibly embarrassing things that know one else would really think of. Like how his arms and legs flail around when he runs. -laughs- You know, I was half-expecting him to run around like that during the Jonin exams. I guess you're nice to him after all though. I could shoot myself for thinking that. -dies-

Ugh. Pardon me... I seem ramble on about everything in these reviews. I try to make them meaningful and I just have too much to talk about with your fanfictions. I apologize for making them all so long. -heart-

Main point to this review- You are an awesome writer. Please never stop writing. And if you write a book, tell me. -cheesy grin-

Lil Enchantress
Naomi

ZOMG this was hilarious!

I kinda want to know what Ino's reaction to that would be...:D
good job on the fic, I loved it! I am now officially a Shino Ino fan. =3

I get the feeling I know where this is going... yay!

Awesome.

First of all, I'd just like to say how much I LOVED this story. You have no idea. Hilarious, heart-warming, well-written... I really appreciate the hard work you must have put into this fic. It's the bombdiggity, fo sho. Secondly, I'd never read ShinoxIno before, but you've made me a believer! Finally, yours is the first (and only) fic where I've actually felt sorry that it was over. Thank you so much for posting! GREAT WORK!

So cute!
I can't believe Shino actually said it!
agahahaha!
you're good!
any more ShinoxIno from you?

Squea!
I'v never read ShinoXIno before and the way you did it was wonderful! The story was able to progress nicely and mot move to fast or to slowly, iactually enjoyed the 'filer' chapter, it added a new aspect to the story. and...
Shino's so cute!
I really enjoyed this story, I just sat there and ate it up
ROCK ON MAN!

Aaw, its over? But I loved it! It's the first story I read about this pairing and I have to admit that you did a great job!

Great story. I loved it, especially the ending. Kurenai would be proud. Wonderful Ino/Shino.

omg! i love this story. it kept me laughing the whole time. And totally loved the ending! :] keep up the great stories

aw!

so well-written and sweet! i never thought of shino and ino but you made it so adorably cute and funny i am now a totally committed fan of this pairing! ^^

I loved this story and I'm happy and sad to se it end.

Yay! *claps* Nice job! This story was really entertaining!

yay! it the end but im sad, but it was good! yay again! i will make sure to read ur others! BYE BYE!