Hey when's the next chapter gonna be posted coz I can't wait. The first chapter is awesome by the way and this is one of my favourite songs.

Gosh. his eyes turned to sand?
i'm intrigued. write more (:
x

Awesome song...awesome title...awesome story...for writing it in a very short amount of time this turned out really well! so kudos on that...also i loved the little "Dean sayings", when he was startled awake, and the "I love pop-tarts" while blasting Metallica...awesome! I have to admit that it was the title that drew me in...gatta love 'Tallica! I would love to see where you're going with this story and how the song will tie into it...interesting...other than that i love it! Keep up the good work!!

~Mustangs!~

Dude... that was good. Keep em rollin! Good luck!


-Animal

This is great. The only thing wrong is, we need the next few chapters!

Awesome start. Of course, the fact that it has the title of-in my opinion-the best Metallalica song EVER, reeled me in doesn't hurt. Keep up the great work and update soon. Catch ya on the flip side.

Hi! I love your story! The situation, with the sand and the dreams, is original and very well thought of! Congrats! Please update soon and keep up the awesome writing. I can't wait for more!

*BLUIO

i like it. you got my attention. hope you update soon.