LOL! Very funny very funny! Keep up the good work and add a new chap soon plz! I like it! XD

Actually, your character portrayals were, for the most part, well done (bar Kratos calling Martel "Marty"). I liked the flow of this piece. It was unrushed but conclusive...and it really just fit. Sweet, amusing, and alltogether a good read. Good job!

- funkymoleperson