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Ellen
2009-07-20 . chapter 34
I'm back again just to let you know that I agree with Du Shur'tugalar Freohr about making the story AU. You're a great writer, and could do it easily. That's what I ended up doing with my Harry Potter fic, after Deathly Hallows ruined it for me.
Ellen
2009-07-20 . chapter 34
Well that sucks! I only just started reading this story and you want to abandon it! Oh well, it's your decision. Just thought you'd like to know, I really enjoyed reading it. Is there anything I can do to make you want to continue? ;)

And I too think it's disgusting that people can wish death on someone. Last month, a boy in my brother's grade was in a car accident, and I heard some people say they hoped he didn't make it. So what if he wasn't the greatest of people. He'd never done anything to them!
I really hope your mother reported them. They should all be fired! And it's great that you're alright after that. Get better, okay?

Keep writing, and if you do manage to get your original story published, I'll definitely buy it!
Belle95
2009-01-28 . chapter 34
Hey, I know you're not really writing for this story anymore, but I just wanted you to know that it is REALLY good. Just thought you would like to know that...Belle
Gracy Vengeance
2008-09-28 . chapter 1
You've got to update this baby! I was a big fan of this..but I was sad that this has come to a long pause :(

Please check out my Eragon story :D You might like it.
Cathycalamitous
2008-09-09 . chapter 16
this is awesome ^.^
Cathycalamitous
2008-09-08 . chapter 1
OMG. This is the first chapter and im caught...UPDATE! I KNOW YOU ARENT FINISHED...SO I WANNA SEE MORE GOOD WORK FROM YOU!! ^.^
Deathflame
2008-03-03 . chapter 14
um... okay... lol
i love your story so far, its great. it shows detail and enthusiasm as well as lots of description. not many writers do that. thankyou for the good read so far. i hope you get no more bad reviews and write lots more stories for me to read at leisure.

thankyou =)
Du Shur'tugalar Freohr
2008-01-30 . chapter 34
Sorry that I haven't commented for a while. I discovered LiveJournal and stopped going to :P

First, I'm sorry about those awful people. That's absolutely ridiculous! I can't believe they were THAT psychotic! That's horrible.

Second, I'm sorry that you're not going to write any more... you could always completely ignore the canon storyline after Eldest, because your original chapters were very good. :D I really think you could do a complete AU... Ah well. :P Good luck in your other fics! :D
Silverfang
2008-01-25 . chapter 34
WHAT?! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( please try 2 continue sometime, i LOVE this story... :'( please...
Fluffy Lady
2008-01-20 . chapter 34
im really sad abot you finshing it, so could i please contine writing it?
Fluffy Lady
2008-01-18 . chapter 17
i would like to say that in this chapter you put
'Both crystal and sky colored dragons looked at each other and in unison, touched the sandstone grave with the tips of their noses.'
i would like to point out that, A. you said that vanilor is a white dragon and B. saphira is a hard clear blue, not skyblue.
this is not a flamer.
alsdssg
2008-01-18 . chapter 34
Aw. I was interested in what was going to happen. Oh well. I understand Eragon losing it's charm. It lost it for me a while ago. It's still an alright book for me, and I still want to read it to see if he improves.
As for Twilight, I liked it when I first read it, and now I'm stuck in the middle of Eclipse and half-trying to get back into it.
Fluffy Lady
2008-01-17 . chapter 14
i love your story!
that guy is mental
with support,
your biggest fan,
noname227
noname227
2008-01-17 . chapter 5
i love it!
good idea using one of the names eragon suggested to saphira.
I know how she is conected to the false king! [can't spell his name] hes her father, isn't he!?
reignlief
2008-01-15 . chapter 34
ow :( i was hopeing this would not happen tpo this story but like several other i have read it has and they all became forgotten and i DONT WANT TO FORGET THIS ONE I LIKE IT
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