Exciting. Black and Xix make great antagonists, so it's good to see they're not through yet! Good work on the chapter!

No. No!. NO!

That damn bitch! ARGH!! You really know how to make someone hate a character.. >_<

So the second part of the trilogy will be much darker than the firts one? That´s fine; as long as there isn´t any yaoi I can take anything ^^

I only hope will be seeing it soon.

This one was a good piece of work, though I sensed some little changes in the writing starting from chapter 21, and honestly didn´t enjoy the following chapters as much as all the previous ones.

It wasn´t the fact that there wasn´t as much humor in the latest chapters as in the first ones. It was like, there were a lot of facts you forgot to mention, and others you started to add all of a sudden that sort of confused me a little.
In addition, it felt like you started to rush the story. The part we readers were all waiting for, when our heros finally battle with Black, was too short and contained very little details. I had hoped a lot more things would happen, and that she´d be defeated some other, more extravagant way, but that last part is just my opinion xP

All in all, though, I enjoyed it very much ^^ So, like I said, I´ll be waiting for the secod part!!

you're brilliant... have i mentioned that?

Awesome

Wow. I don't know how much darker you can actually make a chapter while still sparing all the major characters. It was a little anticlimactic, though; some stronger descriptive language when the Armada was spamming lasers to finish off Black would have helped. Overall, good work.

UPDATE BASTARD

Scary lady with-a-name-that's-actually-a-noun, I wonder how Zim & Co. will stop her...
They WILL stop her right?
RIGHT??!

>_> Okay, I know you gave us that explanation last chapter, but I doubt even Zim would squirt the/a? tallest with water. The consequences would be...

Yay! Ten points for intention to finish this!

pure awesome.

Does the fail come with awesome sauce? :0

XD Dang, that's dramatic.

Have I mentioned how absolutely incredible you are? This chapter was wonderfully written. I've been a fan of your writing style from the first chapter, and it's only improved. As a reader, I found myself totally engaged in what was happening.Purple was heartbreaking; most notably his reaction finding Red, and then how hard he fought Black. I'm glad to hear you plan on finishing this, and I'll be anxiously waiting for the next installment!

Ooh, spooky. Xix's walking around in a Dib suit, and he did something unspeakably HORRIBLE to the real Dib. And Gaz is totally fooled! Also, some wounded Irken (Zim, maybe?) is going to go play hero. Great chapter; I'm still hooked!

i'm so glad to see you updated! wonderful, as usual.

The transforming thing never gets old.

It'll kill them one day, forsrz.