I liked this. Reason? It was like an epic poem; more like a story, but in verses. The beginning was the best, and there was a bit of rockyness at the middle/end, but the last line was good. *hugs poem*
Note: Normally, I don't get poetry. It makes no sense to me. Only limrics make sense, 'cause they are funny. And haikus, because they are meaningful, but everything else, I just think "so?" So, if I say I like it, you are special. Here is your *imaginary* gold star. Hurrah! Let us rejoice, hobbit style! Bring out the Ale and the musician and his squeeze box and we'll dance a jig on the table top!
*dances jig*
"The night you said my wife was fat, I beat ya down and shat in your hat! Away we go! A la da da~!"
Yes; I'm done.