I thought the suggestion Byakuya had for Rukia made sense.

Also I really enjoyed the way you handled Renji's internal dialogue. This was a very nice cannon fiction.

This is extra cute. I like your writing. Keep it up!

Aw I like this pairing a lot even though I'm also a fan of Ichi x Ruki. Liked the story. :)

Aw...
Fluffness ^^

I liked your description of the kiss - the meaning and heart of it rather than the blow by blow mechanics. The implication that Byakuya may have orchestrated the whole thing was nicely done, as was Rukia's understated "Yes, I'm sure that's it." I could almost hear the deadpan sarcasm. You write her very much in character.

OMG!! this story was so super sweet!:D I haven't been a Bleach
fan for that long but Renji and Rukia are already two of my fave
characters as well as my new fave couple for like come on after
watching episode 32! for anyone out there who doubts Renji loves
Rukia is a tottal bonehead to boot and should die painfully so
for I cried like a baby damit and it's not fair so screw you to
hell Ichigo and die already!!hehe just kiding!!:)

Keep up the good work and I loved the ending scene with Renji and
Rukia with his super sexy red long hair out...Um...for he is
so hot like that its a pity he doesn't look that way all the time
for i sure as hell could get used to that! and I bet Rukia could
too and last but not least to bad for Byakuya for he's hot!! but
tottaly crazy but i still love him anyways.

I can't believe I've never read this. What the crap have I been doing?

It was fantastic. I loved it. Renji/Rukia is so under appreciated. Thanks for making a great one about them!

Very dramatic, though overall it was an enjoyable read.

It thought you did quite nicely on this. Renji and Rukia make an adorable couple, but I must say, Byakuya quite frightened me in this. He was just so...casual.

Again, nice work!

I can't believe I'm reviewing so late -bows head-

This is amazing!

I absolutely love this pairing! Awesome fic, you did a great job.

That was cute! :P

OMG I

lmao, i really like this. Renji and Rukia make an adorable couple. and Byakuya...*shakes head* i'm not even going to start on that man's issues. tho he did lose his wife. *sad look* ne ways, great story.

This is so good! If this wasn't a oneshot I would tell you to continue it because it has a lot of potential! Oh well...good job!

So sweet. Renji deserves 2 be selfish atleast once 4 Rukia and 2 himself!

Aw, this story was great! I'm all warm and fuzzy feeling now! Good job!