Um, well, it was kind of odd. I didn't really catch the point of it. That's probably a fault on my part not yours. I would recommend more detail in the future.

~Angel

ok that was halarious! "they had to break up b/c joey always ended up in the hosipital" lol! i no im evol, and bakura kissed her, u send a wrong message for a sec

i mean think about...right after they kiss, he throws money at Her? "that was an awsome kiss, heres 5 bucks" think about

i still dont get what xactly happened but i really liked it :)

Loved it!

*hugs you* First off, THANK YOU. I imagine this was tricky to right, and my bugging you p[robably didn't help. Thanks SO much for the fic.

Now, on what I thought of it...good, very good. I assume Bakura's the one who made the slash marks? Anyways, it got kind of confusing at some parts, and I would've loved a bit more detail (and a bit more Bakura XP) but all and all, it was GREAT. I loved it.

Keep up the good work, and good luck in the contest.

~Compy