Umm... you might wanna fix your fic description. There is no way that this can take place after Dramatic Precious, becase Weiß was disbanded after DP, considering Omi had left the team, and Birman, Manx, and Persia are all dead. Your writing places it after the OAV, although it creates an inconsistancy, since in DP Weiß is still in the trailer.

hm so this is gonna be a SchuRan fic?

Hurray, your back with a new story! I had been depressed by fear that I would not be reading more of your terrific writing soon or frequently enough to satisfy my addiction. Great start to this story; I hope it is not a one-shot. Wonderful description of the trauma suffered by both teams, and particularly Aya and Schuldig. I loved the humor in Schuldig's rescue of Aya, and the how well their current needs seem to be met in each other.

*screams* _ Oh God, oh God! Please post another chapter soon! I am completely, and UTTERLY obsessed with SchuxAya as a pairing, and there's not enough of it!

I am SO glad for your story. I love the opening. You've described the situation that Weiss is in so succinctly, and yet with an incredible writing flair. There's just no other way to say it - you write well, and you write description and backstory well without making it boring. Your choice of words is so sophisticated, and yet it fits perfectly.

Gyah! I can't WAIT for the next chapter! _

Very nicely written! I love your smooth transitions from scene to scene! I'm looking forward to more of you beautiful work _