i liked it, i hate that el actually is sleeping with dani, i hope you continue it, i hope that they admit their feelings to each other

That was AWESOME! I've been reading these and yours is one of the best I've come across. It was realistic and did justice to the characters...way to go!

That was such a great story,but I was woundering if you could write a story from cragen's point of view of where elliot and olivia's relationship is going and what kind of relationship they have now.I have been searching for one like that but never found one can you be the first.And again awsome story.

very passable

Ooh, I really like this. Very honest, authentic reactions from both of them. Great job. I'm glad you branched out into SVU fics. I hope you continue that! :)

This was really good!!

I like this story. I wish that you would write more! I haven't seen the ep with this new partner, but it's an intriguing premise.

That was nice. It seems a bit unresolved to be an EO fic, but you're a good writer. I liked it; good job. :)

I wanna cry cuz u know that exactly how its gonna go down on the show...or some way like that.Up-date soon!

This is so great!

"It’s that I need you in my life too much, and I’m terrified of screwing us up by starting something.”
I love this line!

Awesome job!

Very cool, but you were just kidding about that being the end right?

YOU BETTER HAVE BEEN! lol.

Update soon please!

I have to say, it was more than passable :)

By the way, maybe you should add another chapter that takes place a couple weeks/months after Elliot and Beck split and make Olivia and Elliot hook up. Just a thought :D

Grr... It was good, but where's the EOness?? WHERE?

That was good, looking forward to the next chapter!

I liked this story. You did a really wonderful job of displaying emotion and not over-killing the Dani character.

Great job.

Sarah