Sad!!Why did she do that?I wanted to see Guy's reaction when he read the letter...

serious fic!Sad and very angsty.A very pretty one in a way.I wonder why she killed herself though...

Why did Natalia have to kill herself? It's so sad!

I really liked your story! I love GuyXNatalia! Write more fanfics please!:)(:

By the way, I loved the emotion and the angst! Especially the angsty part!

Excellent job. That was very sad and angsty. I loved it. Generally I don't go for angsty stories, but this is an exception. I love it.

Thanks for telling me... So this is what all of the people in the fanclub were talking about...

OMG, this was so sad... Gah, I keep expecting fluffy things from you! Anyway, beautifully written, as usual. You need to PM me the reasoning behind this, either on here or on the Tales Forums(or you could just post it, I guess). We need a section...

Eh? She died? Wow...I didn't think that she would end up putting the sword to use in the literal sense. I honestly thought that she was confessing her feelings to him. That was shocking.

But I liked it, nonetheless.

*adds to Favorites*

How nice.

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That's so sad. I suppose that's what you meant, though.

...And if you don't know who this is, I'll hunt you down... *cough*

This was beautifully written, and I love the emotion in the letter. But I couldn't find myself really enjoying it for one simple reason-- why?

What reason does Natalia have to kill herself? She refused to do so when she was given the choice before, and she has even more to live for now. She may have had a crush on Asch but she could live without him, she has for seven years. And as you state in the story, she loves Guy, not him-- and Guy is still around. I see nothing that would cause her to commit suicide. Perhaps if she felt that Guy wouldn't return her feelings-- but we see no indication of that, nor any indication that she had asked him and he'd refused to reciprocate. I just don't see Natalia as being suicidal--not now, or ever. She's too strong. And because of that, the story falls flat for me.

*sniff* how sad... I know I hate Natalia, but still. great story Picup! and I promise! [I promised Fox of Anubis too] that I'll try to send 'em a message saying to add TOtA up! FOA is trying too! :D

Hey Picup great story it was sad that Natalia died but she did tell her feelings to Guy in letter does Guy return her feelings and how does he react when he finds out that she dies? anyway this is a wonderful and sad story